Please update! I have reread this story so many times and keep forgetting that it hasn't been completed. It's a great story! Please update!

Poor juvia

U people are so stupid u can't like gruvia or whatever the hell it's called and hate gray for one lil thing u bastards make me sick this story sucks to be honest erza and natsu punk ass real quick to fight gray but so quick to laxus and gajeel and Mira Jane and gildarts with they scary ass to be honest ain't natsu ain't nothing but a wanna be goku and a second rate naruto whole he's a demon goku and naruto true to there friends while punk ass reject a phony

Yea whatever this story is boring everybody writes the same damn thing I'm tried of seeing gray get beaten up cuz he don't love juvia or makes a mistake u people sicken me when natsu hurts Lucy nobody's confronts him actin like lil scared bitches but wen gray does something everybody tough as hell if ya didn't know love is a two way streak so fuck dis story this dumb piece of shit writing u did what kind of friends are they I hope u don't every write again

Love the story so far, can't wait to see what you do with it

Ahhhhh! W where's the next chapter I feel cheated. Hmmm I just 're read this and man it's even better than before. Gray's still a creep, Lucy is useless as always. Natsu. ...good on you for getting some sugar from Lissana.

Update plzzz

I think people fairly dislike ooc stories hence the bad comments. I dislike it myself too and your Gray is severely ooc and you sound like you hate him. (I believe he is the type of guy who treasures beauty but respects girls too, the type of tsundere guy but very cheerful at the same time) I'm a gruvia fan who love Gray and Juvia so I understand why people are commenting this as an anti gruvia fic.

But this is your story. So dont let people dictate you. Go with your flow. However, this is some constructive criticism:

1. Divide your paragraphs more properly and cleanly. Sometimes too many words jammed in one huge paragraph would make readers lose interest.

2. Dialogues is important, but monologue is just as important too. You tend to use dialogue more. Remember, monologue can deepen the depth of a character coz not everything is spoken. And it can make the readers understand your characters. Explain the feelings well and the scenes too.

3. Plot twist would be good. You tend to follow a certain storyline but it is too jumbled up to the point of confusing. There is a technique if you wanna write flashbacks, so you need to make sure it is placed properly in the plot.

4. Reason and implication. People will ask why Gray did that? Like I said, perhaps you can use monologue so readers would understand why the ooc...

Otherwise, keep writing, and I hope you'll write more. :)

I thought this stupid anti gruvia fic was dead. Fuck!

can u put in proper paragraphs sometimes when reading i lose where i am cause its to long to fit into one paragraph so can u separate them properly please but good so far made me cry sometimes i felt ready bad for juvia at the beginning

Gray doesn't deserve Juvia, he is a bastard and with lucy? my notp! aghhhhhh sorry just i hate this couple so much!... Lyon go for Juvia! Gray shit!

! Literally this fic is really confusing and ooc, and with so many things that just don't have sense in why the charcters act like this :/

HEEYY! Listen up please! this fic is awesome as it is going don't let your mind be influenced by others! Take it at your own pace dude, please! It is your fic and ONLY YOU get to decide what is going to happen...not anyone else...

Aw I didn't get to read the past chapter but honestly you should further the plot how you want, it's your work. Don't let others dictate you and limit your creative expression :)

From what i have read I believe it to be really good but that plot twist was a little... How do you say extremely unexpected and abrupt.