I almost didn't read this, until I found out how funny it was.

my sister said she wanted to do a story like this. I'm glad to see someone did it.

Hahaha. It was funny. You should add some fart humor, just sayin...

Please, please do more! This is amazing! XD

Yay! Ravioli for Pres.., er, High King!

It READS hilarious, but it's in fact the way I play, so perhaps I should just chuckle a bit in a manly way and go plunder another Nordic Ruin.

It's so ridiculously exaggerated, but funny as hell!

-He was singing "The Age of Aggression" because that's one of three songs bards are legally allowed to sing in Skyrim.

That right there, killed me deader than Alduin. :)

-It wasn't her fault that she was just so pretty and loveable.

LOL! There you go. That just sums it up.

Well, you've certainly captured the tone of a few fics I've read. This includes a character with an overly flowery name (some of which doesn't even fit the naming conventions of the character's race), writing that puts focus on "hot" characters and just general Mary Sue stuff as well as poking fun of the game itself (exploiting Faendal for free training and the ability to make anyone fall in love with you just by doing a fetch quest). I'm curious as to whether or not you used certain stories as "inspiration"?

It's nice that you're having fun with this, and it certainly made me smile a bit.

(still laughing) Oh boy, this…this is good. Great parody! Keep it up!

I must say this is awesome, but there is not enough pointless description of le main character. also there needs to be more unreasonable love for the sue.

Gramlons away!

hahahaha! This is epic :D

Loved the mention of the free training with Faendal amongst all the jokes xD

Ravioli... *snorts* :D

excellent chapter again Heiwako :DDDDDD

... you've pretty much describes exactly how the "Lovely Letter" quest goes. XD Also: love how you keep calling Ralof "Ravioli" (the ultimate silly placeholder name).

Glad you're continuing this! I love your serious fics, of course, but THIS... oh, it's beautiful.

The description about Ulfric is just pefect and accurate. It actually had me laughing out loud. Now, you just need to add something about Vilkas :lmao:, perhaps she knows he is "the one" just by looking at him. And boy, she is dangerously under-weight, almost anorexic, but I guess that comes with the territory.
For descriptions, how about "blue frosting depths"? I just read something like that in a Fallout fic, seem really purple-ish to me ;)

LOL! Not too far off from some things I've ready. Terrible job, Heiwako! Just terrible. But that's a compliment in this case.

Love this:) You wouldn't know Lauren Cooper, she would make a hilarious Dragonborn, maybe I should try it.

Oh, good lord. I loved this. It was hilarious. XD.

(I kinda agree with her, though. Ulfric is hot but the way many people introduce him more or less like that in the story irritates me.)

Oh myyyyyy! That was super hilarious I was confused at first why you of all people had the title in bold letters, then I was rolling with glee after reading it! Kinda have to admit that perfect characters irritated me sometimes (yeah, such words coming from someone who still had no fanfic posted..)

Anyway, keep on writing! :)