Reviews for Exiles of Innocence
AnimeFan0216 chapter 38 . 4/13
This is one of the rarest good story of d gray man I ever read. Please keep this up and update as soon as you can, d gray man is a good series and I am searching for a good fit with this. Some of the stories have good plot but when you look at the pairings, Damn... They are filled with fetishes for yaoi and BL, for crying out loud I am a straight man and I like a normal pairings but this section were dominated with gay stuff. So you have my thanks for writing something normal.
strangewaraxe chapter 38 . 4/4
? It's been 3 years since this updated, apparently. Im gonna have to reread this cause i dont even recognize the fandom.
Sabrina13254 chapter 37 . 9/6/2019
This story is amazing. Please continue it I love Allena
Guest chapter 1 . 6/25/2018
Ok totally in love with the story. Four new Noah awesome. Please oh please finish this fanfic for the sake of Allena
XxBlue-ButterflyxX chapter 37 . 8/26/2017
I'm so happy that you updated, can't wait to see what happens next.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
UPDAAAAAATEEE PLEAAAAAASEEEEE
Ey chapter 34 . 1/1/2017
well,i think allen's level 2 is fine.

PLs update more . it was the greatest lenaleexallen walker Fanfic aver!
DarkstalkerWoF1499 chapter 34 . 12/16/2016
Are you gonna add our OC soon?
Omega chapter 33 . 12/8/2016
Allen's Sword of Exorcism doesn't affect him AT ALL because he's the wielder of the innocence. Why would he be bothered by the weight? Despite the left arm becoming a sword, it's still his left arm. I'm really sorry if this might sound rude or insulting but your comprise is a huge bullshit.
Omega chapter 33 . 12/8/2016
Allen's Sword of Exorcism doesn't affect him AT ALL because he's the wielder of the innocence. Why would he be bothered by the weight? Despite the left arm becoming a sword, it's still his left arm. I'm really sorry if this might sound rude or insulting but your comprise is a huge bullshit.
Guest chapter 33 . 12/8/2016
Why does Exorcism Sword dominate his left arm? Because it's a known fact that parasitic type innocences use their accommodator's own life force to power up their abilities. The higher the synchronization, the more the innocence takes over the body... and the closer to death the user is. Allen is recognized by Apocryphos (Sentient Innocence; Heart's 'Guardian' if you haven't read the manga) as the most connected exorcist to his innocence. It's not just for convenience, it's synbolization... By changing the theme of his 'Critical Point' and into your 'Level 2', you're ruining Allen's motif as God's Clown. It's basically the true form of his innocence. The silver claw is unstable by perspective as you saw in the first arc when you saw it transform to weapons.

'His right arm is for humans (Crown Clown - Cape). His left arm is for demons (Crown Clown - Edge).' By his arms becoming becoming one (his left the sword and his right the weapon arm - a man who can exorcise with his two sides of self - left and right arm - as one), he's basically going true to his word, the sword can cut the evil while sparing the good.

It would have better if you tried an idea that I read in a fanfic, Allen improvised his lost left arm with an imitation of one from his Crown Clown.
Guest chapter 33 . 12/8/2016
Why does Exorcism Sword dominate his left arm? Because it's a known fact that parasitic type innocences use their accommodator's own life force to power up their abilities. The higher the synchronization, the more the innocence takes over the body... and the closer to death the user is. Allen is recognized by Apocryphos (Sentient Innocence; Heart's 'Guardian' if you haven't read the manga) as the most connected exorcist to his innocence. It's not just for convenience, it's synbolization... By changing the theme of his 'Critical Point' and into your 'Level 2', you're ruining Allen's motif as God's Clown. It's basically the true form of his innocence. The silver claw is unstable by perspective as you saw in the first arc when you saw it transform to weapons.

'His right arm is for humans (Crown Clown - Cape). His left arm is for demons (Crown Clown - Edge).' By his arms becoming becoming one (his left the sword and his right the weapon arm - a man who can exorcise with his two sides of self - left and right arm - as one), he's basically going true to his word, the sword can cut the evil while sparing the good.

It would have better if you tried an idea that I read in a fanfic, Allen improvised his lost left arm with an imitation of one from his Crown Clown.
Addie Lover of Stories chapter 33 . 11/28/2016
Hehe, oh the musical screams that foretell the task they've received! Simply delightful! XD I can't wait to see this arc in this! Thank you so much for writing this!
DarkstalkerWoF1499 chapter 33 . 11/28/2016
When is "our" OC coming into play?
DarkAngel573 chapter 32 . 11/24/2016
I love the story, and I understnad that romance is not the main focus of the story. I would, although appreciate you incoporating more romance in.

P.S. Update more please!

Thanks so much,
DarkAngel573
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