Where is the rest of this story? So addicting and also very upsetting that it’s incomplete like your other stories!

Worst story ever no memtion of the sm names

Soooo, no more?

Please finish this story, I am loving it. How you write is captivating :)

Seriously heart broken that this story hasn't been updated in years.

Hello! I see what you mean by this story being an epic! I know it has not been updated in ten years, but if you get around to it, an update would be lovely. I really enjoy this tale you're spinning with such wonderful details...so thank you for writing it. As for constructive criticism, there are many instances where you add apostrophes to make a word plural and times where you fail to add the apostrophe to make the word possessive. Also, the words "your" and "you're" seem to be getting mixed up. That was all I could find in terms of constructive criticism so I hope that helps!

This is really good I hope you can update it please!

So excited to read the rest ufhhhhhhh this is going to be good. Mmhmmmm I can tell

I'm sorry for the review you got. The story is very unique and interesting and I think it will grow into something amazing which is why I'm sticking around. You have an amazing ability of being creative and descriptive. You're a good writer, don't let anyone try to undermine your talents.

Despite the obscurity of the beginning upon rereading it made sense AND was beautifully written. Good job I might add because it was a powerful introduction

damn this story is making my heart race. romans, gods, sexy endymion and senerity PLEASE UPDATE?

Update update update pleaseeeeeeeer

Damn you!
There is no next chapter

Please finish the story

This is a great story and I would love to find out what happens next! I have a lot of questions especially concerning Malachite's interest in Serenity which was different for me