You kind of missed a good opportunity to have Splinter confronted about the fact that he did not shoot Karai, I think one of the TMNT would have brought that up, apart from that awesome story great job

Dios fue ilarante, lloré me desesperé, grité de alegría, me dio ganas de gritarle a Splinter, pero todo se calmo con el discurso de Leo

Wow! I really loved the story! *-* thank you for writing it -

This story was really good! U r 1 of my fav authors!

It's a good story but I don't think you needed to put son many F words

This is great! Please write more. :)

Can you tell me the episode with the techno drone incident? And any other Leo close call moments you mentioned in this story?

Gasp

Sweet

Interesting

Hi
your fic is exclente
I liked it and then wait for the next part "Scars"
Merry Christmas

a very lovely ending, I must say ) I was worried that Splinter wouldn't return after what Raphael said to him, but he did and it's all good. I enjoyed Leo's point of view on what he was going through while he was close to death, and the role his brothers played in getting him to come away from the light. extremely touching. marvelous job on this story )

Wow.
I like so much this chapter.
Raphael's feelings were well described and they were very dramatic.
I liked everything Rapha told Splinter.
The lesson with the fish was very hard for a child of 6 years. This confirms the opinion I have on Splinter "great teacher, but terrible father"

Hi
I like so much your fic. It's so emotive! What is the direction of you blog, because in te fic I don't see it

Auesome you should type in splinter's pov