really think, i think you could slow it down and add a little more depth to it just a little hope you update.

u suck

that was nice.
good job.

LONG LIVE JAUNE!
LONG LIVE RWBY!

I enjoyed this story. You should continue.

NO! DON'T LET THIS DIE!

Well Cole, I can honestly say that this is a charming little story.
It is one of the better stories of romance featuring Jaune that has him be with a less than likely partner.
An unlikely duo, yet pleasing to read. The only way this could be improved is if you add more emphasis on the personal history's and personalities. That way it can feel more like a natural union, not just a hastened and guilt-driven entanglement.
Other than that, it's good!
Also I can't help but feel bad for Pyrrha. She's kind of alone in JNPR. I know that for Jaune to be with somebody else he and Pyrrha must be pulled apart, but that is territory that few wish to tread and/or think about. And for good reason. I like the couple, but for the sake of telling stories, it must happen.

I thought the story was very well contrived and I like how you still managed to keep all the characters in their respective character personalities.

I actually like where this is gong. Cant wait to see more.

Well Yang... Shit indeed. XD

No. It cant end right here. This was just starting to get good with all the fluff and what not. This is a really good fic.

:,( I'm sad your ending it but atleast you left off on a decent spot. Look forward to seeing more from you.

You could have pyyrah get jealous of yang or something.

I'm excited to see what will happen with the double date. Nice work on this :)

It begins...

Can't wait for the next chapter