I think the beginning was all right, but it really bothered me that all of Peeta's lovers were Katniss ladies, they spent most of the story fighting and Peeta becomes cruel by locking up his pregnant wife and regoding that she slept with another woman? I have enjoyed the reader because you have a very easy pen to follow and I congratulate you for it, but I think that this everlack is left to me.

Well, I enjoyed part of this story, but this Katniss and Peeta are overall very immature, contradicting their own words and actions, and this Peeta is downright cruel. He takes her from her homeland, purportedly in exchange for 'protection' for her home and family, and then her father is kidnapped immediately and killed, and he does not inform her of either fact for a very long time, which is just inexcusable in itself. Oh, yeah, he goes ahead and impregnates her anyway. He locks up his very pregnant wife, tells her he's bedded another woman (and a very crass one at that who is plotting against him) and then lets her sleep on that for a full night before he apologizes; then when he finally feels bad, he has himself whipped in front of, again, his very pregnant wife. I don't understand why he didn't tell her he knew her as a child when he took her from her home and fiance without notice; and while drama is something the author does have to create in a story, some of these developments are unnecessarily overly melodramatic and annoying. I guess I'm just not one for this kind of story.

Don't get me wrong. This sory is good, just.. I don't like This Peeta.

And he want they should be devoted to one another. Of course! Because he'd been fooling around with other women as much as he had wanted. ha! I knew he loves her but there are some parts that he is selfish to her.

I'm usually into everlak, I can't help but think when Katniss is with Peeta, she is just like a caged bird... So I wish she want a divorce or
separation. It seemes like the best decision for them. and I still do. She makes up with him because of her people, not of herself. I still don't understand why he wanted marry with her. He can live his life without her. He had enjoyed with his formal lovers, even his women were around his wife!

I loved this story so much and I will love to see more of the baby. I hope you continue writing this story.

Thank you for sharing this story. You are so talented. Will you write more?

I enjoyed the plot, though the politics could have used a lot more fleshing out. In particular, I thought the motivations of the rebels were rather weak. Peeta is not made out to be a bad or oppressive King - in fact, he's notably kind and has brought prosperity to Panem - so it's unclear as to why a noble like Johanna is rebelling. Gale's motivations are equally confusing. I get that he holds a lot of anger towards Panem because of the Dark Days, but the story gives us no evidence that Panem is still oppressing Seam in any way - Panem is actually bringing money and protection to Seam, because of Katniss' marriage. So what's his justification for war? And more importantly, why has he allied with the people who kidnapped and killed his King? The lack of clarity makes the rebellion seem unjustified, making the rebel characters unsympathetic, which in turn makes Katniss seem unsympathetic when she aligns with them.

Speaking of Katniss, she is entirely unlikable in this. She came off as immature, bratty, and wishy-washy. It's difficult to see why Peeta loves her.

This was a good story in the begin but as some one who is totally head over heels in love with Peeta and Katniss I have to say you really warped the characters and not in a good way their relationship is always hot and cold the Joanna bit is strange and also Peeta, Gale and Katniss are going to either be beaten or put to death you have really spun this out of control sorry I try never to be negative when it comes to someone's art, but you have , in my very humble opinion, ruined the greatness of Peetas love for Katniss, diminished Katniss' strength, and turned Gale into a petulant boy who started a war because he lost his girl.

Omg id love to see more of Petra

I love this introduction to Royal Katniss and Peeta. I'm working on your other story where Peeta is a Prince right now and it looks good. Sorry for any errors in my English!

aww so cute loving the baby

yes i think you should update

YAAAAAYYYYY an update to this story. Finally.

I liked this chapter! I'm happy they resolved their issues! And are back together!