Wowww..what a professionalism! A picturesque piece of work...I was able to visualize Frankie dashing 'gracefully' through the forest (and somehow I had this image of Snape there! Interesting, isn't?!) Ha ha...and the ending was funny..it was funny how Frankie didn't realize WHY Rai's skin was getting "progressively warmer"! Ur rendering of that part (and all the other parts for that matter) was so natural that my lips started going for the ears without me realising it. (_) The concluding statement, my dear, cannot get anymore perfect... "thus began a relationship that will continue for several centuries to come", eh?! ha ha..very true indeed! But most importantly, I like how you perceived Frankie's thoughts! It made me agree with u profusely! I was able to feel Frankie's pain and sense his insecurity..and his reaction to Rai's condition was genuine and understandable... I really like how Frankie values his master... Reading this made me curious of what Rai has in his mind... Can you write a fiction from Rai's POV focusing on such a theme? I really want to know how u perceive Rai and his feelings towards Frankie.
The reading of this story was as satisfactory as having a heartfelt meal! Not just that this work fits well into the original, I am sure the writer of this manhwa would also be proud of himself to have had inspired such a soulful writing from one of his readers... Great work Blue Bird... hope the Muse that is guiding you right now accompany you forever. Just like how u enjoy writing, I enjoy reading, and, as you should know, I take great pleasure in going through ur works..So hope U would continue updating ur profile with more fics. Looking forward for ur future attempts.

Sem

Awesome job! I love your translation of Rai's words. It seems more accurate. Most translations aren't very clear. I've only found one that is similar to yours. Love this. Thanks for posting it. :)

Chapter 2 is even better, I so love it, and the ending is so funny and so cute, godness, Franky!

at last! been waiting since the first! good job! but still greedy for more! ur stories are just too addicting! much honoured to read them!

Loving it please update soon :D I'm loving this s ooooo much xD

Please update!

I enjoyed this very much and hope Frankenstein figures things out. I look forward to your next installment. One little note. I believe the word you were looking for when you wrote 'phantom' was 'fathom'. Phantom is a spirit. Fathom is understanding something. ;) Thanks for posting this! :)

awww... straight to Frankie's head! I cud use an oxymoron for describing my experience.. it was alarmingly serene for me! Felt heavy and empty at the same tym...oh how shall i put it?! I feel so sorry for him...he is so devoted to his master, but I can also understand what Rai may be feeling...

good shot BBP..I def wanna read the rest, so plz update.

Sem

Sweettt! awwww Frankestein! It's all right! Awesome job just awesome! looking forward to this story!

You're alive! The story is so nice and a bit sad so far... I'd love to read the continuation!

Can't wait to see part two!

Beautiful. The story flowed realistically and unperturbed as if it were truly made by the author! The vocabulary was strong but not overpowering and the over all idea of Frankenstein's thoughts and actions were dead-on. Excellent work Blue Bird! I'm happy to see you back in the game again my friend!

Ah,I just love how you portrayed Frankenstein's emotions and thoughts!
I was waiting a while for your new fanfictions and I'll be looking forward to the next part! :)