the ending make me suprised, but this is a beautyful storythankyou for sharing

The ending is not what I anticipated Wahahahaha good work on this story though

I don't know if this is an attempt at sexy Madara but i hate this so much, he is basically assaulting her and threatening her with pain... she said no multiple times. She was crying, for god's sake. how can anyone find this romantic ? This is rape, i don't care if he is handsome, this is rape

Toxic

Such a good story

omg so good! I'd love to so a wat if, she did make it back to the Senji Clan

This is one AMAZING story omg. I absolutely love MadaSaku even though this story is rape-ish and dark and ARGH-Madara-WHY-ish. Poor Sakura had one big adventure time-traveling to the past and meeting both big legends Madara and Hashirama. It’s unfortunate her road crossed the Uchihas first, but that’s where all the drama and tragedy stems from, right? The whole loyalty-seal idea is incredible and the story surrounding that jutsu is even more so. Great job! Izuna and Tobirama are awesome too, though I have to admit Tobirama was kinda OOC, but nothing outrageous. Izuna was more my boy. Haa... I wasn’t pleased with his death, no I wasn’t. But it had to happen. And then there is Rei :3 gosh was he cute. I was SO glad Sakura kept him and loved him despite all the misery Madara had brought her. I’m not sure if I like or dislike the ending though. It was okay I guess, her being great-grandma is sweet but Madaras Edo-Tensei is less so. But oh well, what did I even expect to happen. Its insane-mad-Madara were talking about. All in all, it was super entertaining to read, with an awesome writing style, coupled with hot sex scenes (even though it was rape!) and great plot-progression. The only minus points was the some-what rushed ending, but again, nothing that destroyed the whole story.
Thanks for this amazing story! Ill definetely reread everything once I forgot about the plot. I do hope the storyll still be here for me to do so! Again, great work!

I absolutely loved the story! The fact that Marada had Sakura come back to life was just supper toutching and you could totally tell that he truly loved her will all of his heart and soul. Now I believe that if you were to continue the story would be for her and Marada to stay together for good, and that Sakura does in fact find herself loving Marada in the end and they have an eternity together to continue to watch the family continue to grow.

my ship is gone now
Woe, I must cry

Oooooooh!

This was beautiful and sad and quiet unnerving at times, but I like what you did with it. Good job and thank you for your time and effort in writing this

Wow! That ending was wild!...This whole story is wild! hahahahahaha OMG she's not even allowed to stay dead in peace. Dang, I feel really bad for her tbh. This is sad BUT this was a really good story over all! Thumbs Up! Round of Applause! XD

You probably know this already but you're such a good writer i normally quit when shit stops going my way but your writing kept me going even after tobirama died man you're too talented i hope you make it far in life amen.

What the hell is wrong with you?! Ever fucking HEARD of free will even in stories?!

A very demented story I LOVE IT!?
I do wish you could have added the 2 lemony goodness pieces into it fuck what others thought. This is a great story with a twist.