Perfect first chapter. Pulls you in and gives a nice introduction to the characters. Look forward to reading the rest tomorrow (it's nearly 1am and I have to wake up early, for I am a idiot).

Excellent piece!

Damnit that was fucking good man.
That was very good.

I forgot how much I missed this dammit Van

omygosh

and now i feel like writing dammit
what happened to sleep? :')

ahhh this hurts my heart I haven't gone near fanfiction in so long c'mon Van y u dooo dis 3

What a great little snack :)
thoroughly enjoyed

thanks for sharing \o/

sweet, short, and a fun read. you have a poetic way of describing things and I really enjoyed the intricate description of the treacle tart, along with the "sweating" of her tongue. great piece

Gorgeous imagery, love

The third chapter really made me want to review. I thought it was really hilarious that Sirius gave her one of James' dirty smelly socks! It made me laugh. This was a fun read. Just wanted to let you know that. :)

The whole serie is very well done; sweet, funny and realistic. Sirius is the best. Keep writing!

So simply and beautifully written! I love it.

Omg this is absolutely wonderful. I love your word choice and just the entire thing is so cute.

Nice! I like it, it's perfect, write more please!