“Why is the Brand of the Exalt on my penis?!”

Yep, that killed me.

I cringed at the part when Sumia was telling Chrom about the story, but this was hilarious xD

I'm not even INTO smut and I enjoyed this!

Probaly because irr wasn't really smut, honestly. It was more of a humor story. But it was freaking hilarious. I love it when Sumia is portrayed as a romantic but really really sexual, and Chrom kind of has to out up with her shenanigans.

Like the Sumia in this story!

Anyways, funny stuff. Funny stuff.

Oh my god.
This is amazing. The world needs more pervy Sumia. 10/10

"And why is the Mark of the Exalt on my penis, of all places?"

I swear I literally can't stop laughing, I'm going to need to see a doctor soon.

Hm. This was pretty fun to read. I don't quite know how to offer any deeper criticism; perhaps I'll do so on another story. But I've read a few now and you are surely very talented and able.

Please keep it up.

Youre very straightforward. I like it

Aaaaahahahahaha, this was great XD XD XD

I loved this. this just is the ultimate lemon-parody. Great work.

Oh boy ! I just couldn't stop laughing ! XD

You had me laughing loudly with 12 inch exalted meatstick. Good job, and I also think anytime a pegasus knight gets laid it should be called 'pegasus riding' from now on because of this fic.

So I say Sumia would be a novelist after the war and THIS is what you come up with? You are either undeniably insane or a FREAKING GENIUS (not that they are that different). Seriously, a crackfic parody of crackfic lemons? Just so you know, this probably ruined the last part of my story (which I still need to write). And I am fairly positive pedoTharja is a truth so...

Laughed all the way through this. I must have read way too many bad fanfics/lemons...

Not really much criticism to add, cracked me up like crazy, good job.

...Did I just read a crack fic inside a crack fic

What the hell did I just read?