Reviews for Jarl of Blackreach
someone randome chapter 11 . 4/13/2018
PLEASE BRING IT BACK!
Spooths chapter 11 . 3/21/2018
Aww dang. I was just re-reading some of my old favorites and I'm sad to see this abandoned. It was really good yo! Ah well. Maybe I'll get lucky and there'll be a magical update tomorrow.

Thanks for writing what you did tho! I really loved it!

I Remain,
Spooths
A.R.H. Writer chapter 2 . 12/21/2017
Yet another great story! I also enjoy the fact that this character collects the journals, something I enjoy doing in my own playthroughs! one small critique however; in writing dialogue, you always start a new line when there are quotations (""), EX:
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Serana opened the door.
"Dragonborn? I didn't know you had returned to the castle."
The dragonborn looked up, startled.
"Oh, I didn't see you there."
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A.R.H. Writer chapter 1 . 12/21/2017
Very good story with an awesome opening! I am a big fan of the idea of what could have been after dealing with Harkon, and am currently writing a fanfic similar to yours right now centered around a Dunmer vampire named Domunis, but the one thing that made this story is the snap the dragonborn has in her words.
TriggerLaw chapter 1 . 6/4/2017
Please update this story. It's amazing
FrostyChops chapter 11 . 5/8/2017
Guessing it's personal reasons this was abandoned then? A massive shame, really enjoyed the read and genuinely want to read more. Good work on for what you did write :D
awesomeness-rocks chapter 1 . 2/27/2017
So much potential and great idea sad to see it abandoned
Guest chapter 6 . 1/15/2017
Quick question: Is the dragon of Blackreach still a factor?
Guest chapter 11 . 4/26/2016
Can you continue this soon please? It's been over 14 months since the last update! I understand that this is on hold from your profile page but please don't forget about all us readers who absolutely love this fic! This isn't the first time I've re-read this and it certainly won't be the last! Please don't abandon this and we'd really love it if you came back soon!
Leez chapter 11 . 10/22/2015
After re-reading this yet again I'm afraid that I have to ask; any chance of this starting up again any time soon? This fic is unique enough to have me specifically look for it again every once in a while to read it again even if tit hadn't been updated and I'd really love to see it continued. I know that it's on "hold" for the minute and that yoru currently concentrating on other things/ fics/ fandoms. However I really wanted to know if you had any plans to still continue this fic after so long and if so if you planned on it any time soon?

Sorry for the trouble but you've got a truely great fic/story here! I'm defintiely looking forward to/hoping for more!

Best Regards,

Leez
frankieu chapter 11 . 9/30/2015
nice story so far hope ya will continue it
Mornight chapter 2 . 9/8/2015
Femslash involving Serana, great writing, and what looks to be an interesting story. This is exactly what I was looking for. If subsequent chapters are even half as good as these first two, I am going to be a very happy camper for a quite a while :-D
Morgana LeFay97 chapter 11 . 7/19/2015
please update this story
kytkis chapter 11 . 2/2/2015
Think I might've played with Stormcloaks atleast once if Ulfred wasn't so highly unlikable.
Dragonofelder chapter 11 . 2/1/2015
Awesome! The Dwemer have always interested me as well, and having the Civil war going on as well makes it a really good story!
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