Please update.

This is really good so far, but I would of thought she would of gotten a ability or two besides that necklace, with her recalling that Alpha person. Other then that, well done so far and I hope for more.

I really like how this is going. Sarah's interactions with everyone are really good.

I hope you continue this sometime. It's really great.

Please PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE pppppllllleeeeeaaaaasssseeeee CONTINUE! THIS IS BY FAR ONE OF THE BEST FICS I HAVED READ IN A LONG TIME!I'M HOOKED! PLEASE CONTINUE, PLEASE!DON'T LEAVE IT TO DUST!
I CAN'T WAIT FOR TE NEXT CHAPTER!

Shit I hope Sarah gets better

Plz continue!

HOLY CRAP! Best story ever!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SARAH YOU'LL BE ALRIGHT WON'T YOU? AND POOR RATCHET TOO AUGGHH THE GUILT THAT HE'S GOTTA BE FEELING IS PROBABLY GONNA HAUNT HIM FOR THE REST OF HIS LIFE, AND IF SARAH DOESN'T MAKE IT THEN OH GOODNESS HE'LL NEVER FORGIVE HIMSELF! NOOOOOOO EVERYTHING NEEDS TO BE ALRIGHT *CRIES FOREVER*

It's not your fault Ratchy! Great chapter! Update soon!

plz continue!

I'm liking your story so far! :) It seems really well written and the character are pretty well thought out. One thing though, Justin Beiber's Canadian, not British. Sorry to bother, but that really bugged me! Great job so far, though!

Love it!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! THE WORST POSSIBLE SPOT TO END THE CHAPTER (I do that too...) IS THE ONE PLACE WHERE YOU END IT! I NEED TO KNOW MOOORRREEEEE... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I think you meant "REVENGE of the Fallen" not 'RISE of the Fallen".