Umm can you plzzz update? Its been THREE YEARS AND SEVEN MONTHS!UPDATE!
Love twilight sparkle

one word...
fluffeh :3

Awesome job!
I'm loving this story! Everything about it!
It's really super original, I love the storyline so far!
Keep on trucking, you rock girl ;P

Ooh, interesting! Yay, I see some ash and dawn moments here! Yes! :D
How dare you leave me with a cliff hanger like this?! You're so evil!

Can't wait for the next chapter... :) :)

Wow! That chapter was awesome, but at the end was so sad. So so sad... :'( Can't wait for more of this fic

I am enjoying this stoey and liked this chapter too! Keep it up amd I hope you update soon

Hey, nice cliff-hanger here! Your story's getting pretty interesting. :)

So heart warming she kind of remembers ash more so great ;) wink wink

Sorry, I didn't realize you updated because I haven't checked FF in ages! This was a really good chapter, and I hope my review will encourage you to carry on with the fic!

Good story keep it up!

Your writing has improved A LOT since I last reviewed, and the plot has also developed nicely. This is one of the best regularly updated Pearl fics.

Hey, it's BattleWithYourHeart :) I'm too lazy to sign into my account right now ahaha.
Anyways, this is a really great story! I love it :) And I loved the Team Rocket scene in this chapter!
Great job Daisy :)

So I see that you like magne

This story is starting to get interesting! I think something big and exciting is coming. Please update :)

Not much to say in the way of criticism. No grammar mistakes that I can spot in my tired state. I see that the chapter leads on to something bigger, and I look forward to it.