Ahhhhh such a beautiful story. I love rule 1a as well, it makes me laugh so hard XD. Great job xxx

I'm an Italian girl, and I've found your story amazing, i don't know if you will read this but I wanna try so I can say to you "go on writing! Youre story is really interesting... Bye! Love, Giulia.

Loved it!

Update soon! I love it XD

(since the story was finished when I came across it I put my reviews together)
Chapter one: I like the way you made it to describe detailed things without making it boring at all. I did read it very fast since the story immediately pulled me in. Very good start.
Chapter two: Makes so much sense that McGee was unable to keep it from Abby... Character-typical behaivor (considering the situation) and therefore great.
Chapter three: Thanks for writing the rules down below (I do not remember them all). I like Tonys first rule; wonderful for every shipper-heart.
Chapter four: This set a simile on my face; I am not sure whenever it is a little sad or happy, I believe it is both. This is a beautiful chapter. (I have to repeate for emphasis) A beautiful chapter, a beautiful story...
In general, I think that you got the characters very well. I like this story more with each chapter, each sentence even, maybe.
Chapter five: A good end for it. I loved the way you described the characters; I mentioned before how I like the (quality) writing style of yours which enables you to give detailed descriptions without being boring (a rare ability). The opposite of boring, the story did not let me stop.
I like the romantically sad feeling in it, it reminds a little of the feeling in my favorite episodes from the series (that is what good fanfictions should include)... just with a more satisfying end.
A great story, a beautiful story even.
Thank you for writing!

This was really sweet. I loved how you got into Ziva's head. It wasn't ooc at all. And god, I feel bad for tony. I am glad they begin to work it out. Yay! Seriously. Amazing story.

GOing home!

Great chapter. Gibbs is all knowing. :)

take this Tiva crap elsewhere and let fans get back to reading old school NCIS fanfic with the team solving cases.
Annsan & DieZivaDie

Wonderful! I hope you continue.

this is a truly lovely story - I like how you involved all the Team and their point of view.
I can not wait until Tony and Ziva Meet
Tony - bring her home !

dont be worried at al! that was so wonderful i do hope you write more soon! please please!

ahh wonderful. And i loved what you wrote in you introduction "Short, sweet, and to the point. How I want it all to end." -perfect description ;) Really like what you did here, looking forward to read more!

Keeeeeeep going

Amazing development!
I miss Ziva so much too. I can't wait to see how you will continue the story!