This is perfect and delightful and I love everyone and everything about it! I think I've read every one of your Torian and Bounty Hunter series and they are actually my favourite personifications of both characters anywhere :) sorry for the overkill, just so happy you've wrote this, all the warm, fuzzy gratitude to you good sir!

LOVE! This is wonderful. I love how you've characterized them. Any interest in continuing? You'd make me so happy!

This is seriously funny! Your characterisation is great, and Gault, especially, is PERFECT! and I shouldn't know what I'm talking about -I haven't even played the BH yet...XD But loving this. ;P

Thanks for sharing

Torian's on a playing field he does not excel. Poor Torian. Yay for Gault - His commentary is always the best. So excited!

The first chapter was hilariously funny, Gault is the perfect narrator for comedy.
The second one is cute. I like their interaction, especially that Torian manages to gather his courage, despite being shy and awkward.
I'm looking forward to reading more.

Just one point of criticism: First they drink rum, and then drive a speeder? Bad example for young speeder pilots ;)

Yay, another chapter! Love these two! I'm a crazy Torian fangirl, and I do believe you capture him better than any of the other fanfics I've come across. "You're in a cantina!" Classic.

This was exquisite and I giggled all the way through it. I sincerely hope there's more of this stashed away somewhere.

Gault has to renegotiate his contract, indeed. I'm more excited about you continuing this than Christmas. Yay, Gault and Mako! And intoxicated Torian makes me happy. Weee...

Omg please tell me you're gonna write more, this was hilarious. I especially loved the standard devaronion punching time.