| Reviews for The KICK Pregnancy |
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  Guest chapter 8 . 2/18/2015 At least put an epilogue where Jack's mother is dead and so is Kim's dad or she just disowned and kicked Jack out and he lives with Kim and her mother since her dad is in jail. |
 Kickfeaver chapter 8 . 2/16/2015 good chapter and ending. |
| Kickfeaver chapter 7 . 7/29/2014 Good Chapter ! maybe instead of going - Jack - Wait milton was there you could say Wait milton was there, Jack said confused - Put some emotion into it, so we know what they are feeling or how they are saying it, it gives the story more depth, and we kow how the characters react and feel. other then that you are going great. |
| Maddyliza1234 chapter 7 . 7/29/2014 Love this please update soon! |
| EB chapter 6 . 7/16/2014 Damn cliffy xD |
| EB chapter 3 . 7/16/2014 Umm, is this all in one or two days? Because I'm pretty sure you can't find out if you're pregnant or not after just one day. I think the minimum is 3 weeks or something. |
| autumn1999 chapter 6 . 7/16/2014 Ooh God! Hopefully Jack can save Kim again! And I can't believe Brody would want to hurt Kim. Great chapter! I love this story so far! I can't wait to see what happens next chapter! You're a great writer too, keep up the good work! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!C: |
| Raven NeverMore chapter 6 . 7/15/2014 I can't wait to find out what happens, and to me it sounds like Brody's with those guys, I'd bet they work for him, and he's trying to get Kim back because he's made she broke up with him. By the way I like the name Emrys. I hope you update soon. :) |
| Maddyliza1234 chapter 6 . 7/15/2014 Love this! I missed this sorry! |
| Kickfeaver chapter 6 . 7/14/2014 Good chapter ! |
| Vannaluv chapter 5 . 4/1/2014 I'm so happy so finally updated! I thought you discontinued it or something! Great chapter! Update soon, seriously! :) V |
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/1/2014 You made Kim an irresponsible bimbo. She knows she is pregnant and she orders a drink...dumb! After she tells Milton he doesn't have the decency or courtesy as a good friend to tell her she should not be drinking. She gets drunk off of one drink...right... Then she acts like a slut and starts grinding on some random guy...slut. I am sorry but you need to do your research on things first before you put them in a story. It takes at least a month to find out you are pregnant. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/31/2014 Great chapter! Hopefully jack and Brody can find Kim before she gets too far from Seaford. And hopefully Kim doesn't get hurt. I love this story so far! I can't wait to see what happens next. You're a great writer too, keep up the good work! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!C: |
| Just.Know.That.I.Love.You chapter 4 . 3/31/2014 Pregnancy tests will not work that fast. She would have had to be pregnant before ever sleeping with Jack for a pregnancy test to work that day. Just saying. Otherwise, interesting story, update soon. |
| Cheyenne chapter 5 . 3/31/2014 Please continue this story |
