wasnt juane the same way? didnt he have no other motive?

am sorry but there are some holes here in regards to the robots. we do not know exactly what kind of robots they have. and the only ones shown would NOT be good to use in a mine.

I'm really digging this story. Developed characters are always a good thing, and you nailed that. There are a quite a few misspellings throughout the story, but most of them are minor. While some of this goes against my own canon, I do like the way you executed it.

I see that this was last updated in August of last year. Is this a discontinued story? If so, could you pass it off to someone else and give them the general plot? Because I'd hate to see such a good story end so abruptly.

This was an awesome raid on the mob family. I loved it. Now, Jaune being bisexual, pretty cool, I can get behind that (so long he gets with Pyrrha.) Pyrrha playing the sexy figure distraction, classic. Ren's teacher being Roman Torchwick, holy fuck, I did NOT see that coming. That alone is worthy of a spew your drink sip all over the screen moment. Also, the godfather being afraid of needles is too precious, but disgusting Ren infused a syringe of piss into him.

Great story so far, just wish I got a time machine to skip to therelease of the next chapter...

What kind of dust was in that jar?

RWBY Greece Project Freelancer Project Argonaut?

It's pretty cool to read this sorta theory about Nora and Ren's past, and I feel like I have little to no trouble at all in believing it so. (Though I have an interesting theory as well that seems a little more plasuible, but what have you.)

And I felt the whole discussion with Pyrrha explaining to Jaune how Aura affects women's cycles was kinda awkward, but in a good way to provided some comedy to it, especially since Jaune was rather blank and accepting of it all.

Another exciting chapter with another one of your lessons on Aura and Dust. They are so well thought out that it feels canon almost. I loved Jaune's confusion during the lesson plus the insight into Ren and Nora's past is cool and should provide some interesting moments. Hopefully we will see segments of Jaune and Pyrrha's adventure and maybe some Arkos romance to boot.

Good chapter, I loved the connection to the White Trailer you made, that was good. And I liked the insight into Ozpin's past again. I am curious as to Evanora is, but I think I know who.

A very touching chapter between Weiss and Blake. I loved it. I also like the idea of Human and Faunus inbreeding and the nod to Deadliest Catch with the Cornelia Marie.

Ooh, Jaune's gonna get the redbooty. This was a hilarious chapter even with the Purrha Past stacked on top. Also, Jaune should have his own harem or something. Put in Pyrrha, Ruby, Weiss, Blake, Yang, and Velvet and the harem is complete. He should probably keep the glasses and grow a beard, make it like Gavin's.

Anyway, good chapter. And I thought Jaune and Pyrrha were cleaning the toilet in the beginning. They were unclogging the drain, really?

It must have been terrible for Pyrrha to discover what her group truly was and to lose her mother when she barely knew her. You did an awesome job for her backstory and I can't wait to learn more.

Sorry but I just don't buy Ruby's reaction at the end. It doesn't fit her character at all.

Glad to finally see you back in the saddle. A great chapter, leading up quite well to future ones. I look forward to seeing how this situation all plays out and I can't wait for the next one. Chas1881