Wow, I must say, I'm fairly hard to impress, and even harder to bring out a raw emotion and attatchment to characters; alas, you've done a great job of it good sir. I found out about this story through Mr. Elf on v2 of Weiss reacts, and i understand full well why it was added.

love this story. keep up the great work.

Hey, here's an idea for a gift for Mina's EIGHTEENTH birthday: how about a ring?! It's what she always wanted!

Wow, that is NOT a good power for a lunatic to have. That's bad. This is baaaaad. On the plus side, we've already learned it's not permanent.

That was incredibly intense. This chapter alone has earned a favorite for this story.

I love that you wrote in Lizzie goddamn Borden as a waitress in a maid cafe.

Okay I can't continue reading unless I know Mirā becomes more tolerable. Just something about her makes me feel...I don't know what but I hate it

You not only show get technical ability in your writing, but also a strong emotional understanding, which you put on display through Mina and Nadia. The aforementioned faunus being two of the best rwby oc's in fanfiction. Don't stop writing.

One of the best fanfics I've ever read. When volume 3 happens I hope that you will continue to write but I suppose that's up for you to decide.

I just found We Were Close yesterday and it was absolutely AMAZING! I love the pairing, and how your OC Mina acts and sticks to her own moral code (unless it goes against Blake's).

I am sad to see the story end, and I will look forward to new chapters if you decide to continue this with RWBY Volume 3's storyline.

I would definitely give this another read any day :)

Mina can be such a drama queen. Hmm for critique, the drama in this chapter felt kinda fake and forced. I dunno, maybe its just me. There was never any 'danger' in their relationship so I was never in suspense, we all knew they werent going to break up. Especially since it was all resolved in one chapter. Still the fluff is entertaining.

Funny.

Fantastic piece of work. Absolutely marvellous and it's been one of the best things I've ever read. I'm especially impressed with your focus on emotional growth, and both Mina, Nadia, Blake and Weiss made a lot of progress and grew as individuals. It truly feels like you've created something unique and I will miss your take on RWBY and your OCs a lot. They really fit into your AU well, and Mina was so adorable :)

A sincere thank you from me to you.

P.S. I hope you return to it one day. There's so much more you could do if you want to. Cinder's still up and about, Weiss has her family to deal with, Nadia might be a huntress ...and seeing more of Yang and Ruby would be nice. Totally understand if you don't want to though!

P.P.S. I honestly expected White rose to happen eventually, but you proved me wrong. I feel a bit sorry for Weiss since she's alone but also good of you to not cram a relationship into there just for the sake of it.

Again, thank you!

Slice of life can be good. This was pretty entertaining. Though i do hope to see someone get one up on Mina eventually. Everyone could use a bit of humble pie every once in a while. Still, definatelly enjoyed this chappy good job :)

Heh, this feels like a nice Arc 1 resolution. Very cute. Wonder where things will go from here?