Please no haek!. Im so sick and tired of that crap. It doesnt make naruto a badass or anything, just a womanizing piece of crap. Its so unoriginal at this point its still not liking the age thing, but sticking with it. I swear though if i read about some seven year old having the hots for his sensei or teamate, ill hunt you down

Ok. So i like how this is starting. Its got potential except for one thing. One thing thats bothering me is that i dont think you realise your writing about a 6, i repeat SIX year old. Do you realize how silly this chapter sounds when you think of a 6 year old doing these things. I hoppe the next chapter makes more sense,

...please don't give up on this story. Even if it takes another month or two, please give it another shot.

I agree with Rebmul and 016 I will wait for the story to be complete before I even think about reading it but good luck with it

I'm of the same mind as Rebmul so I'll wait.

While I do hope you have a spark of inspection to continue this story I will check out the new story your making.

with how old your 2 fics are and the fact they died ill be waiting till I see a complete on your new one before reading it.

i like this one should continue is and the new on as a new story .
i think if you read this story over carefully then it might give u some ideas to maybe ether continue
it or rewrite it in the same way but with new ideas.

Plzz update

I am looking forward to chapter 8 and I hope Naruto learns Metal bending.

Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it.

Well it's not deserved when the author is an idiot. At least for me.

You're a fucking idiot.

Enough of the mindscape shit you stupid motherfucker!

Sucks so far.