Okay, so, is this story happening on ancient Japan? (I'm guessing is set in antiquity by the fact that it is very common to have slaves in this story, and on Japan because of the use of honorifics) And, in what year does it happen?
And, I'm very curious, do I have to put this fanfic on my "Mobiumshipping fanfics that I love but, sadly, I would never have any advance nor an ending" list? I hope I wouldn't have to...

How does atem know yugi
will yugi fall for yami and atem and vice versa
will yami be okay

Great story hope you continue

Oohh! Good! I love it! I so can't wait to read more!
~Shadow

Hey! Please do continue! I love it! Thx for making it! I love your stories! This one in particular is really good! Same with your story Troubles! Adore! Anyways! Tyyl! and please keep going!

If you ever need someone to rant to, you can't rant to me. Ik I'm just a stranger, but I kinda understand the insomnia thing, and loss of job and lack of things needed to update, as the computer I used to use is a piece of crap now.
I do adore this story, it makes me happy the sexual frustrations aGH-
And Yugi/Heba is now here will things escalate quickly? The mobium- and bakushipping threesomes make me squee so I cant wait to see how you write this one its just- uNF-
I wish you luck with finding a job if you haven't already, and with life in general

;)

This is great.

Sorry to hear that dear, I hope in the near future things will turn around for you ) After reading this chapter I'm eager to see what happens next; especially now that He a is added to the mix of all this. I'm going to take a guess here that Heba is a very dear friend to Atem in the palace. I wanna say he could be Atem ' s little brother, but that wouldn't make any sense of course. At least I don't know yet. And how interesting th at you have May married to Seto; interesting pairing those two are. Last I was a smidgen bit bummed t hat there wasn't much reaction between Atem or Yami; last chapter was great X3 hope to see a little more of that in the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

Dear PersianWitch,

I am writing this letter as apology to you for forging Wordsocereress's name in the cruel reviews left behind. It wasn't her. It was me, acting out in my immature need to seek attention in my boring life. I didn't think before acting because I didn't care about who would be harmed by my trick. I see now that it was uncalled for and hope that you can find it in your heart to forgive me and please don't accuse Wordsocereress anymore. It was all my fault.

Sorry I can't login to my account for some reason. I wanted to say you need to practice on your writing style and do a better job. There's no detail, no descriptions, no proper grammar, nothing. It's just plain weird and stupid. If you need some advice on how to do a better job, feel free to PM me because you could use the help. A proofread wouldn't kill you.

That was beautiful

great, nice to here there will be more! . hope to like the next one and thanks!

This is great.

Holy crap. My heart was beating fast during this whole chapter; mainly for Atem. Like I don't even know where to begin with this chapter; it's just TOO FRIGGIN GOOD. I was super excited to see that you updated the story, and I was even more pleased with the chapter. So much deph has gone into this clearly and I've noticed one thing with Yam. Towards the end with that whole scene between Yami and Atem, is it just me or did it look like Yami had some sort of personality switch? I mean one moment he's looking at Atem interracting with the guy with such lust and all, but then he backs up and acts like nothing ever happened. My reaction was the same as Atems. Dafuq?

What also got me a little more curious is the time period. I wanna say ot's in the early 1900s or so, but I could be wrong. Then of course there were some MonarchShipping moments; loved them all. Can't wait to start seeing more of them. Keep up the work! And don't worry about losing a few readers. It just means they can't handle this AMAZING story!

Take all the time you need. As long as it's coming back, I honestly wouldn't mind waiting a year, because some things just can't be avoided. And I'm one reader you won't be losing; I look forward to the next chapter, whenever that is. .