Thank you for a truly wonderful non-canon story.

Amazing. I like your imagination.

Sam shouldn't have pushed her to see Charlie right away especially with all the things that have happened to her.

Shouldn't Bella have been so traumatized that she would not want to have sex

Ok I'm sorry but this story was a major disappointment, they built Bella up to be this badass and all she did was turn 3 vampires upside down and throw another and then she let them go so that what? They could go out and kill others? Honestly I wish I wouldn't have even wasted my time reading this.

I'm sorry but there is nothing sweet or heavenly about the taste of cum

When Sam finally accepts the imprint if I was Bella I would tell him so Sam you'll be anything I want you to be? And when he says yes I would tell him well welcome to the friend zone bitch.

Great story.

love it

Do you even understand what privacy is? Sam tells the entire pack about Bella's past, without her knowledge or permission. That's her story to tell, and someone with her background would feel violated having strangers know all about her without her consent. Even if they don't know the full extent, it's still her own story to tell. I don't even understand why you'd think to put that in the story. And then at the end you go totally off course and start showing Embry's perspective. Why would you even do that? Nobody cares what Embry is thinking or wants to read about his thoughts if they're reading this story. Stop jumping from person to person and follow a single storyline.

There are so many plot holes in this story that seriously bother me. the situation with Phil is ridiculous. I don't believe for one second that Bella's home life with Renee and Phil is realistic at all. It makes no sense that Old Quil would tell an outsider, Phil, about the legends, much less that they are true. And Phil just believes it? Yeah right. Bella is being told she MIGHT phase, yet not even Jacob was told about it while displaying actual signs before the transformation. None of the possible pack members were. Jacob's older sisters, Rachel and Rebecca, certainly weren't told shit and Rebecca Black lives in Hawaii with no knowledge of shape-shifters at all. This glaring hole in your story really annoys me. Nobody is allowed to know the secret unless they are on the council, a pack member or an imprint. Also, for being 18 and having been abused by Renee so badly, Bella sure had no problem spilling everything to Phil, despite barely knowing him and not knowing if she could trust him. Victims of abuse and rape don't just blurt everything out like that. She seems like she's barely affected from such trauma, and since you're trying to portray her as somewhat strong emotionally, you messed that up by having Bella continue to live with her abusive mother after turning 18. Phil taking Bella all the way to his office for a conversation was stupid and made no sense. None of this makes any sense. Bella talking to her dad every single week over the phone for 16 years without fail makes no sense, especially with how bizarre their interaction was when first meeting, as though they had never or barely even spoken before. This story needs major work. You should have had Bella leave her mother on her own after graduating to meet her dad for the first time in La Push instead. And it's annoying that you don't follow the main character, and instead show conversations between Sue and Charlie, as well as Phil and Renee, that none of us care about because we aren't reading a story about them, but rather a story about Bella and Sam.

This was a fantastic story! I couldn't believe all that Bella had to endure in her life but was so happy that she found the family and love that she deserved and dreamed about! And then finding her purpose and what she could do was awesome too! Thank you for sharing!

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Don't understand why that vampire was messing with his head unless it was because that stupid bitch Alice had some kind of vision and fairy boy got him to do it so he could get to his blood bag easier.

I hope she does how bad will it get between her and Charlie before it gets better?