I realise this story is a few years old but only discovered it this morning and had to comment.
I wasn't quite sure where this was going in the beginning but soon began to understand. I thought the writing was excellent and the story really sucked me in. Brilliant idea well executed. Thanks it has brightened up my day.

This is my first ever review because this is the first time i have read a fanfic again right after finishing it! Thank you for this brilliant piece of writing - fantastic characterization, beautiful imagery and i felt you made the canon episodes richer without taking anything from them or diverging much.

So far so good. Your scenic route seems to be very interesting. For a person who doesn't like a lot of description you held my concentration very well. I very much enjoyed reading your chapter.

While I didn't have a brain tumor I was in a coma in 2003 for a week. When I came to, I was definitely disoriented and also lost a good chunk of time. I didn't even know who I was for a time. The Drs blamed the anesthesia and blood loss but that's neither here not there.
The point is, memory loss is familiar to me. And from what people have said my personality changed. I became more subdued.
I understand Booth's confusion.

Really nicely done story with time switches. Reminds me of ending to The Notebook. Thanks for writing!

Just read your story through. Wow! Great job in intertwining the different parts of your story and keeping us guessing: is it a dream or is it real? I think they should've used your story on TV instead of that script they followed - it would've spared us a couple of seasons of heartache. Really enjoyed reading this... well done!

It mind twisting but sweet and a re-read helps!

Brilliant start to finish. Such an absolute pleasure to read!

Awesome story! If only it could have happened this way on the show... Perfect...

I told you on twitter how much I loved this chapter and all the chapters before it but wanted to make it official and leave a real review. The amount of forethought and mental gymnastics that had to have gone into writing this very complex story has got to me monumental. To pull it off so beautifully just shows your amazing writing skills. Always just enough information, never too much kept us guessing and theorizing and coming back for more. Loved how it all came together at the end. Just beautiful. Congratulations on such a great story and thank you for the wonderful journey :)

So...somehow I just found this story and it was amazing! I also just discovered you as an author. This story floored me, trapped me, and did what all good storytelling should do...kept me from all household chores lol. But in all honesty I couldn't stop reading it! Your ability to capture the characters at their best and worst, haveing the reader question reality and dream was astonishing. I loved every word and the emotional rollercoaster you put me through. The way you tied in avolon, the character, the song, the legend, and the meaning was a character in itself. Your grasp on symbolism is par none. Thank you for this wonderful fan fiction. I will now go and start reading all of your stories and I look forward to reading more from you.

A new fan, Tamara

nice work it all made sense in the end :-D

Wow. That was quite the puzzle you put together. I'm definitely going to have to reread it (and pay better attention to verb tense!) to really wrap my head around it. But truly, you put something together that's pretty awesome.

I enjoyed this very much. Thank you

Wow. Just wow. That was amazing and so complex! What a terrific, thought-provoking ending. I need to read this whole story again from start to finish. Right now.