Great ending. Unique story. You did good. Best regards HG14

Well done. And you draw much better than I ever could, too.
It ends on a sweet yet spicy note. It worked well. Good pairing, good dynamics.
All in all, great short story :3

I've always imagined Cerinia to be kinda like Sauria, maybe a bit of Earth, with the larger part of the land being covered in forests. You did a pretty good job there, I think.
For me one of the parts that was most interesting was the meeting with Krystal's parents. To say it isn't something written about often would be incorrect. It's safe to say, though, that they don't always play out the way I like them. They rarely do, in fact. This one gets a tick mark. It's almost like it's a setup for another story. Which doesn't seem to be too far off, now that I think of it. The Iridium Chronicle has similar things going on. I'm going to pick up The Oasis later this week, but I have my suspicions.
For the time being I'll take my leave again. Perhaps you'll find me patiently waiting for another 'gift to the readers', and perhaps you'll find me rubbing my head against your newest creation, absorbing the words written on it.
Until then - nice work.

Funny how Fox saved Krystal from falling to her death and Krystal wound up returning the favor. If Krystal is to be the mother of the new Cerinian lineage, I don't think it'd take to much coaching from Fox to start it off right. Who says Marcus is the only one? Probably litters of Fox and Krystal kits! Great way to wrap up the story, glad to see Krystal got to introduce Fox to her parents, so rare that is. Also, good job on putting SPOILERS on the oasis in this!

Say, K. S., if this is supposed to be simillar to *my* Cerinia, you're way, way off then mark. To me this Cerinia looks like the Cerinia by SabreWolferos. Anyway, I enjoyed reading this fic a lot, though I noticed a whole lot of minor errors that are mostly style errors in the second chapter.

Needless to say you did a good job on this. The only thing that was disappointing to me was that Krystal didn't dream up any Cerinians to meet with Fox other than her parents. It would have been neat to see what the rest of her family would have been like. Ah well.

Anyway, I'll looking forward to The Oasis' update.

Interesting story. Very nice

Great story so far, but I do have some comments.

When you said that their inhibitions had been drastically decreased or eliminated, you then stated that Krystal knew it would have an adverse effect on her. Knowing that is technically an inhibition. But, if like you said, she had some inhibitions left, then I can see it working.

But really, I'm enjoying this story a fair bit.

So she wanted the D even before she knew about the D. Damn, Fox.

But in all seriousness, this is nice Krystal and Fox fluff. It's also nice to see them spending time together and just allowing themselves to breathe. As much as they want to get down, they restrain themselves which must be hard by any right. Hope to see more of planet Cerinia and where their adventures will take them.

Sweet CLIFF DIVING what's next river rafting or canoe racing

I love it already. I wonder just how much control Krystal will have over this illusion. Is it her own creation where she controls every aspect and person or a reliving of a memory? Personally I would love to have Fox meet Krystal's family and I hope you take every creative liberty because you always do such a good job. Also, just who did Krystal do this before with? Guess we'll find out next chapter.

I'll be brief. I didn't find any errors, or none that glared out at me, so kudos to you. :)

This was an interesting story, to say in the least. When I first clicked on it, I thought it was another guy who published it, not *you* - since you were the last person I excepted would write a third story in addition to "The Oasis" and "Iridium." The idea of Krystal "showing" Fox Cerinia through her mind is highly original and I commend you for that. I've been slacking off on reading "Oasis" because an idea for a oneshot had seized my mind, and it might not get published until sometime next week so stay tunned (if you wish).

Anyway, have a Mighty (instead of "Merry") Christmas, even though it might be your last.

nice chapter man...so krystal draws out fox's spirit into her body just for...lol.

Hey K S why not have one where Krystal asks Fox about his parents?

Well first off allow me to congratulate you on your success, you certainly deserve all the recognition you've gotten this year. As for the story here I must say I'm eager to see it through, I've never really read anything that takes place on Cerinia so I'm very interested to see how you will represent it.
As for the artwork you did for the cover I have to say it's a far better rendition of Krystal than I've ever been able to do. Accurately portraying that muzzle of hers is...difficult. Either way well done.
As I have said I look forward to reading more of this story and I look forward to seeing what you will be publishing in the coming year of 2014.
-general whitefur