| Reviews for The Original Sin |
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  F4tjb chapter 1 . 9/1/2018 Veri n1c3VWcst0riFc |
| Ttrev chapter 3 . 5/6/2015 So I love this! I just finished the manga and I like how your story is going I can't wait for more chapters! |
| Kagome Pureheart chapter 3 . 11/29/2014 Waaah! Angst angst angst! It makes my heart fan girl. Lol |
 Nightray-Hikari chapter 3 . 8/21/2014 Yay! An update :D! |
| heidi chapter 2 . 7/27/2014 hi I just read both chapters and I want to say that the way they're written has my heart beating fast and adrenaline going through my veins with your subtle words. I hope that you continue this story and I will be reading your other stories as well. |
| royal.gangster26 chapter 2 . 7/13/2014 Aww.. Please don't lose motivation.. The story's really seriously cool! Its a mutsukiXanise.. Hihihi (v) |
| JustAnotherScribbler chapter 2 . 3/10/2014 no don't loose motivation! Not when you have a plan and all that jazz : ) |
| UnseenAngel22 chapter 2 . 3/6/2014 Please update! I wanna know what happens next :) |
| Aristathelia chapter 1 . 2/22/2014 This is good so far and shows a lot of promise for a large future storyline. I love the biblical aspects you've put into the story and the fact that he has a great nephew. Love it, look forward to reading more. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2014 wenn are you gonna put somme more chapters |
