Poor Iruka...all the secrets being revealed..

I love this au so much

I loved it!

Oh my god I loved this so much XD I was smiling pretty much the entire time I was reading it. Thanks for the read XD

This was sooooooooo cute and heartwarming and FUNNY OMG you dork ilu

I have to admit, I teared up a little and not just from laughter... It's just that I'm in my last year also, and it's so nostalgic already even if the year isn't finished yet. I relate so much to what Iruka is feeling and I really appreciated this fic. Thanks for this awesome time!

Oh god the last part with Gaara sacrificing himself, I died of laughter

"Over my dead body!" omg this line killed me aha oh Neji niisan is so cool, and tha moment "Neji had apparently picked up a large stick to extend his range" that is so funny
I wonder what's up with Sasuke and Naruto, although I kinda have an idea...

The last sentence was so nostalgic and beautiful! I laughed at the part where Kakashi recalls Iruka threatening Naruto to make him ride on the roof of the bus, aha so cool

awesome. I could stop laughing!
U did a great job.

I love this one :)

OMG! I love those types of activities! My favorite games are hide and seek (in the dark, I'm a fucking ninja when it comes to hiding in the dark!), freeze tag, trees( its like a cross between seaweed and red-rover), oh and treasure hunt! I love playing these games!

ooooo you should have a nice long story (around 16 chapters or so) about how Sasuke is unknowingly connected to Naruto. and this time ITS NARUTO WHO FIGURES OUT HE LIKES SASUKE FIRST! :D

SKILL.

I love your style of writing so darn much!

The fic was okay, but in the end, I was put off by all the public sex (Suigetsu/Karin, Sasuke/Naruto), and the TMIs (Suigetsu announcing to everyone that Naruto took Sasuke's virginity, Shikamaru casually adding in that he'd caught them in the locker room). That conversation took place in front of a bunch of people AND a couple of teachers! All of that is funny and cute if you don't think about it, but if you do it's really socially awkward (putting it mildly).

So one the one hand, the characters in the fic are like us readers. They are gleeful voyeurs, same as us (we're reading fanfic with graphic sex after all). We want to read about sexy people going at it, they like to watch sexy people going at it, and we all like to giggle about it.

BUT. In real life, no one (or should I say, very few people) would act like this. Watching couples kiss in public for an extended period of time makes people uncomfortable, so I can't imagine Naruto would be making jokes while watching his cousin get pounded in the bushes. It's not like they came over to Naruto's house and started having sex in one of the closets, they're in public. That makes a difference in how people will react.

What I'm saying is, all the extreme PDA and extreme over-sharing about each other's sex lives is sexy but not realistic. You kinda have to make your characters react like real people in non-crack fics; otherwise, what are you writing about? People, or fantasy creatures that aren't actually people?