Great story. Seeing Harry work through his issues and coming out the other side was satisfying.

yea, can't continue anymore. It's badly written and formulated. the dialogue is stiff, formal and worse than the text. it lacks spirit, character and feelings. it's giving me a headache to read.

Great story.

... and buggered? Eeep! Nasty Snape bumming harry! No no no no...

I forgot to review a couple chapters back. I'm glad that the veritiserum scene went better than I thought it would.

I'm about ready to stop reading. You don't force a truth serum on someone to get them to talk. That's the last thing you want to do to get them to talk things out. It's a violation, a rape of his will. Not cool at all. (

Great story! I love it!

Great story. Harry and Sev getting rid of the rest of the Death Eaters. Good show boys.

thanks for this story

You aren't writing new stories I noticed your uploading old stories

Nice one, and again a really decent premise. Thanks!

Duhh duh Dunn! SQWEEEEEEEE! Another happy ending. Whoot!

You are going to get me into a lot of trouble lol, I should be editing a master's grade paper for a university, but I started reading the story and I just...couldn't...stop...no...matter...how...hard...I...tried. :D This was really an amazing story.

Love it, but wish it had a epilogue about Harry's life after that last scene, like what his NEWT score is, does Harry and Sev have children and when he becomes a healer does he stay and help Poppy till she's ready to retire or get a job at St Mungos or start his own practice? so many questions unanswered

Unique story idea, a good read.