Oh wow. I like it!

I HATE YOU

A very intense chapter.

A wedding and maybe the begin of more problems.

Gods. That was amazing!

Elsa's insehurities and Hans's ambition is not a good combination, more if Hans's treason is incluided.

I like the conversation between Elsa, Eugene and Rapunzel, Elsa is good but she needs more social habilities.

And Hans was a douche to the very end. Figures.

Is a begin, good or bad, i dont know.

I like the dynamic between Hans and Elsa. Hans ha a good point but bad intentions.

Good chapter.

Is a cute, Olaf, Sven anf Kristoff, they loves Anna and his love can save her.

A good start. Hans had a good idea, evil, cruel but intelligent.

Just a random thought (that is, if you do check my review one day), do read "Frozen Again" By SetsunaKou, if you are still up for reading Helsa, or maybe you already have?...

I just completed reading it... And no offense but I'll admit it left me feeling angry rather than satisfied. I know my opinion is among the absolute minority. I know you were aiming for a dark romantic drama and you did achieve it, and you did mention it repeatedly that you very well knew you were making Hans to be the biggest jerk to ever exist all throughout the story. I just can't help but feel there were too few moments between Hans and Elsa to begin with, and if we go according to the timeline you have set, the pace was alright but still I felt it went too fast. I understand that that's exactly what was supposed to happen in the plot- Hans abusing Elsa's vulnerability and Elsa falling for it, and Hans falling for her anyway by the end along with Elsa. You kept it close to reality, I think. This isn't the only Helsa fiction I have read and I do enjoy Helsa. And I have also read angst in Helsa fandom, except the"angst" one of them tried to potrayed was through events which were closer to true morbid abuse and rape. But I also landed upon very well written Helda fanfiction that were truly worth the time taken to read them and left me wanting for more.
I don't know, maybe I too much of an optimist and was hoping for something happier? Maybe, the ending broke my heart more than anything. And maybe I'm the only one who felt Anna's anger was justified. I like Elsa to be strong but the circumstances Hans wove was the reason why she turned out to be so... weak- mentally and emotionally- and I get it, especially considering the point from where this story actually started. Whatever it is, don't mind much about what I had to say. I appreciate the work you put into this and people, other than insignificant me, admire it, so well! Good job. Now, I'm probably going to try reading more of your works in this website.