This story made me far sadder than I expected. I really felt bad for everyone involved. And I even started crying towars the end. I felt heartbroken for both Mary and Thomas. Neither of them deserved to die that way. But a nice twist on the story with Joker and Bruce being brothers. They ended up together after all.

this was amazing! so sad and dark. you are such an awesome writer that made me feel every second of this story!

this is so sad! especially since I know he will marry some one else!

Absolutely brilliant. Well written, imaginative and gripping!

Lord, this view of it needs to be played out in full somewhere.

Beautiful... So powerful, full of emotion, anger, fear, drama, and sadness rolled together with the future of Batman and Joker. It wasn't about a Joke, but the old and the younger brother fighting a battle that has more meaning than any of the two could have ever imagined.
If you think about it, The ending to Arkham City after reading this makes the ending even sadder since Batman has really lost all of his Family...
It makes you wonder...
Dresner

I pefer this as Joker origins. Great work.

I'm crying.

That is the saddest thing ever

Please please Plllleeeeeaaaaassssssseeeeeeee can you write a sort of mini sequel where Batman finds out?

Plllleeeeeeeaaaaaaassssssseeeeeeeeee I'll be your bestest ever friend ever!

Another great one, dearie! Never stop writing :)

Oh man, I can just see Gordon's shocked face at finding this out. Or Poison Ivy's face, calling batman attractive and The Joker hideous then only to find out their related.

I finally finished this story. I've been missing it all week due to numerous schoolwork but I finally get to read this. And let me tell you, this was very powerful. Just that last line from chapter 12 when Martha told Thomas to cheer up that things will be alright after the movie, I almost just had to stop right there. I just experienced so many feelings at once, it just seems too indescribable. (Which is a good thing)

Overall, this was a very good story (and my review sounds better in my head) and I would like to commend you for your great entertainment skills.

Ah so many feels. It's a nice breath of fresh air to hear a new perspective and story to one that has been told like a thousand times. This is so awesome I loved it made me wonder, made me sad, made me really feel it's not your most comedic but man I think this just tore at the old heart strings. Great work as always.

Amazing story! Can't wait for your next one!