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It’s gonna take a while to process

I have read this story a couple of times now. Completely enjoyed reading it and you are certainly a great writer. Please keep writing.

not gonna lie, wasn't sure how this was gonna end but loved it really well written.

Cool story!

"looks into the camera like I'm in the office"

For one moment I thought they were about to kiss.

I really enjoyed reading your story. I've never seen a one in which I could really sayyes that's what Loki would say/do/feel'. I love the way you describe the scene and I love how you manage to create tension. Thanks.

The epilogue hit me right in the 'feels'.
The ending is hopeful, but everything wasn't magically better. The realistic-ness and bittersweet promise of a new tomorrow.
Thank you.

FUCK MY HEART

one more chapter ONE MORE CHAPTER

oh no

oh god, only three more chapters and nothing is getting resolved as quickly as I hoped.

I forgot which chapter it was and I couldn't bring myself to stop reading until now, but I love the way you handled some of those chapters in which Thor is gone and Loki gets hurt while/because Thor isn't there to watch/protect him.

A lot of stories where something like this happens are pretty unconvincing about it (to say so).
It's always like: "Ohh noo, Thor isn't there to make sure that he's alright and safe and look! What a bummer, Loki is hurt/kidnapped/dying, and Thor can't help him but no one knows where he is and when he comes back!"

This story is actually the first one (I've read) that delivers a situation like this very convincing and believable! For the first time Thor actually has a legit reason to part from his lil bro, and his reason makes a lot of sense too.
Other stories I was just thinking: "Of-frickin'-course, he's gone just as Loki gets fucked up by some wannabe villain (or Barton in this case). What a coincidence!"

Well done! :D

An excellent story, very well written, with a great plot and a lot of suspence. I loved it!

You have such an amazing talent! So far this is by far my favorite FrostIron story! I truly hope you are able to publish the book you are writing (if you still are that is). I fell in love with your story right from the first chapter. You stayed true to the established characters but you also were able to add your own personality to them and it worked out wonderfully. I can't wait to read more of your work!