Me encanta cuando Shelly parece "pulpo" jajajaja.
Estuvo genial, me gustó mucho.

Wonderful!

A fun one

Good story so far

OMG... It's beautiful And very IC. I enjoyed very much! Sometimes I laughed, sometimes it took my breath away... Thank you.

Love it! i liked the Pennys POV, was a interesting way.

Very sweet and nicely written. And a great possible aftermath to the episode.

Loved seeing handsy Sheldon in the backseat - and Amy trying to keep him under control! LOL I guess she wants him sober or not at all - good for her. Sheldon's "sleep with me tonight" had me nearly passing out! I also loved that even drunk Sheldon was still Sheldon - not wanting anyone vomiting in the car he routinely rides in. And Penny's comment in response was just priceless.

Penny - she is simply awesome in this. I love the way you move her thought processes - through her hangover miseries to her annoyance with Sheldon (in part because she missed the buttslap!) to her reactions to the back seat activities and her homesickness. I find it interesting that this is, in large part, a Shamy story seen through Penny's eyes - with all of her tendency to see things in light of the emotional. Which is very much like the show - we see so much of the Shamy relationship in the show from the vantage point of Penny, as she tries to understand and help them along in her own way. And she watches the interaction between Sheldon and Amy much like a train wreck - it's had to see, but you can't tear your eyes away from it. She finds it amusing and sentimental and repulsive at the same time - brilliantly funny!

And the moments - Shamy eye-coitus - just adorbs!

Thank you!

I loved this! It was really well written and you painted a very vivid image and I loved Penny's voice here! Aww yes!

I really liked this little story, it had me chuckling. I always like Sheldon drunk, he is so funny and having him get frisky with Amy is great. I also like drunk Penny trying to egg them on, too funny. This would have been great in an episode, there are so many funny parts. Hope to read more of your stuff.

My only writing criticism is that you use quotes when they speak, because that is what people usually look for, otherwise it read well.

Tehehe I can read this over and over again; it always leaves me with happy fuzzies.
I loved the Bender reference...as I love Futurama and every time I read that line I laugh
pretty damn hard. Of course, I love this piece to death. It makes me smile; it highlights
Penny's awesome points, and Leonard's understanding personality, and Shamy. Oh, Shamy.
I can't wait to see more of your work! :D

I love it but it feels a little rough. Maybe you can let it lie a few days and reread it and you'll see what I mean, otherwise it's nearly perfect.

Wonderful job with this! Loved it and I got the Futurama reference.

Aww...such a cute story. Now we need "the morning after" version. I am curious what Sheldon will think and how he handles things. LOL!

Oh my goodness! What a ride! Drunk Penny and Sheldon getting a little snipe-y while Amy and Leonard continue to show true colors - their devotion to their partners. Excellent story!

It needs to say "Are you on a bender?" Or it doesn't make sense that he is angry. Though I would think being compared to a drunkard like his dad would bring out a far worse reaction.