wow, the protesting part didn't age well for America 2020 huh

Okay, not a nitpick but a sincere question. Are there faunuses or are they all human?

Although I could follow the story relatively well, I just couldn't figure out the pacing. Sometimes it would speed up when I though I had it, and then it would slow down some after I started to read it faster. I know you updated, and it's probably just me being desperate for a story as long and good as this, but just saying. You can ignore some of these nitpicks.

Was this before or after the animations on YouTube for RWBY?

Isn't it thanksgiving? No nitpick here but, isn't it hella early to be talking about New-years?

Didn't her dad get her out of bed at the start of this? Or was it Qrow and I wasn't paying attention?

I love the story so far (I know its been completed for some time, but I'm late to so my apologies). I did have a question which i hope will clarify someone's actions in this chapter. When Yang and Ruby enters the party Yang mentions that basically nobody better mess with my sister or I'll punch them, she sounds very protective, but then she leaves the party not even knowing that her sister had left. This seems to be a major contradiction in Yang's personality to me. Please understand that I am not bashing your story, just trying to understand a point that is confusing me. Maybe it sets the stage for something down the road, I don't know, but was hoping you could explain it to me. Anyway, Sometimes I don't express my thoughts well and can be misunderstood, so I won't feel bad if you tell me to take a flying leap! lol

I’m actually kinda glad for the rewrite. While this story was great in many ways, I felt you could’ve done better, being one of my favorite authors. Good Luck!

I hope you update soon, this fanfiction is absolutely amazing!

Mass Effect is an Awsome Franchise

WTF just wtf...halarity

BOOM! the rose in WhiteRose has started. This story is very good just maybe some detail needed to be filled in but other than that great story. :)

Somehow I knew you were going to bring Whitley into this.

Wow, angstier then any other fanifcs I've read. Keep up the good work!

Handsome Jack? Borderlands right? Best game ever.