Reviews for Turnabout RWBY
shadyxlr chapter 3 . 1/9
Hmm... Loving this build up.
shadyxlr chapter 1 . 1/9
Funny first chapter. Curious where this will go.
Lyrissa Artemick chapter 21 . 11/2/2018
Isn't Apollo's Dad someone else?
Shurikens Miner chapter 1 . 10/12/2018
While I have yet to read anything past chapter 1 (though I plan to), there's two problems: One is a bit of a grammar problem, but it's not too bad, really just some misspellings and some words used in place of their homophones.

The other (more serious) problem is a problem of pacing. The story is going a bit too fast. I'm hoping that changes by the end of this work, though.
Guest chapter 28 . 12/16/2016
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Guest chapter 28 . 11/13/2016
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Guest chapter 27 . 11/13/2016
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Guest chapter 21 . 11/13/2016
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Guest chapter 18 . 11/12/2016
This is great.
Guest chapter 15 . 11/12/2016
Great!
Guest chapter 13 . 11/12/2016
This is getting good.
Guest chapter 13 . 11/11/2016
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Guest chapter 8 . 11/10/2016
Good.
Guest chapter 22 . 9/14/2016
This is getting good.
Super mega super ultra mega chapter 2 . 8/28/2016
"No unless you count hunting the truth as a profession!" BOOO GET OFF THE STAGE!
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