| Reviews for Fire at Will |
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Olympus Angel chapter 14 . 4/13 NO! |
Charliejnr chapter 1 . 8/21/2018 Not a bad story, except for the fact that the CIA isn't allowed to operate on American soil |
Yuenne chapter 19 . 6/12/2018 Wow , if you think about it..the CIA are more of a criminal organization then Olympus. Your not supposed to shoot/kill them , that's very much illegal and kinda the only thing CIA does |
WiseGirl1609 chapter 17 . 3/28/2018 LUKE IS PRETENDING TO BE HARRISON ISNT HE OH NO |
WizardDemigodGeek chapter 14 . 11/2/2017 HOW COULD U KILL NICO. I KNOW YOU WILL NEVER SEE THIS CAUSE IT WAS LONG AGO BUT AHDJKSNDNXJS |
JC RH chapter 21 . 8/22/2017 It sucks that well written and carefully built stories like this have lesser reviews than stupid saop opera style stories. It was really good. The action scenes were written well and you built characters brilliantly. Specially Nico's character and what happened to him was really well written. |
Fasty chapter 3 . 8/7/2017 i immediately thought of the devil is a part timer anime at the cafe part |
Abe Gill chapter 1 . 7/28/2017 The fight was kinda like Mr and Mrs. Smith |
GirlishlyGreek chapter 7 . 4/16/2017 YES YES YESS OMGS YESSSS! THIS IS AMAZING! FINALLY OMGS XDD |
GirlishlyGreek chapter 6 . 4/16/2017 Omgs, I love a tipsy Annabeth XD |
GirlishlyGreek chapter 5 . 4/16/2017 Yesss! The feeeelllssss XD |
GirlishlyGreek chapter 1 . 4/16/2017 Oh my gods, this story is amazing! |
drogorath chapter 15 . 3/14/2017 I really think this as realistic a fic can get .I really love the buildup to the story but Id like to point out a few things which confused me. Wouldn't it be the FBI who catches criminal's in the US? Don't the CIA have a military team to do their bidding? And wouldn't there be indoctrination in trainees to prevent them from ever defecting over as in the armed forces ? I'm not American so I'd like to know |
SeaSpree chapter 20 . 3/5/2017 This was amazing! The writing flow was very natural, and very in-character. Some tid-bits were a tad fast, but nothing unbelievable. Simply put, this was extremely well-written, and I can't wait to head over and check out the sequel! |
onStyle20 chapter 6 . 12/1/2016 mo |