This fanfiction is... AMAZING. I really loved every little detail about this. You are a very talented writer and i really want to see how this is going to end (you promised you were going to give us a good ending). I hope you come back and update this soon

I am from moba so i dont care much.

Here are some thoughts about the end of the story based from the lore and the facts:

First of all, we have Lulu losing her powers and slowly losing her physical strength. The posion that running now in her blood is enchanted (cursed) by dark magic because we read that Veigar used his dark powers.

So if Veigar wanted to remove the enchant he would needed to counter it. As the story goes Veigar dont know the power of that so he tries to find it. But, if he removes the enchantment from the posion then the chemical reaction will kill her in a matter of seconds. Veigar has no other option that to find an antidote.

The only known champions that can make posions are Singed and Teemo to secure the antidote. Singed has no idea for this problem so we skip him. Teemo is now in position to help Veigar and most importantly Lulu and her little cub, because he feels that is his fault. As we read earlier, Teemo said to Veigar that there is no antidote for his poison.

My theory is that Teemo ofc he didnt make an antidote himself because the victim could die in a matter of second. So there wasnt an antidote made to cure the effects of the poison then but it can be made.

His only problem is that he cant reach the Lulu because of the juild in his back and the use of his power to other members of the league. This need to be done by himself and Veigar. The enigma here is that normal Veigar would never trust Teemo and even for death matters.

Now he is going to lose Lulu and his daughter, trying everything with his power to cure them. His behavior is more forgiving and kind, because Lulu is starting to show the opposite of her old herself.

In the end, the story in my mind will go : Veigar finds Teemo, Teemo begs for forgiveness, Veigar and Teemo made a deal about friends in the problems enemies in the peace, passes some time, Lulu and the cub are getting worse- maybe are sick, Veigar and teemo are almost ready to make the final antidote, it is a success in the last minute, Lulu regain her powers and her sanite, her daughter is seeing for her first time her mother and her father saying something like Mama, Daddy. and it will end showing Lulu and Veigar rejoin in the league and also return back with Gnar in the Bandle city, Veigar and Teemo are fighting as ever, Tris and Lulu are chatting about their lives, Gnar and the cub are playing together and they lived happily ever after.

So this is 1 of the many ways that this story can end but i have other endings in my mind that i would like to ask and other ideas from you guys.

But nothing couldnt be done if this amazing girl didnt had such an perfect imagination and story line. Dont thing that im a nice guy. im a bad guy by heart and i did this only maybe to ruin some of the story. Spoiling is a bad thing, right?

Thank you for your fanfiction that some of them loved.

Please, where are you? We need a good ending for this story and you are the most talented person that made a love story between lulu and veigar. I read lots of other stories but that was amazing. We need you whenever you are. Save us from leaving this story and feeling to the self. If something happen tell it to us we are here for you.

Hey man this thing rocks
Whe need you back
Please

I need to study this fic more. My fics are alright, but they're nowhere near this great!

This fic had an ENORMOUS impact on me. It's tremendously moving, Lulu and Veigar are excellently personified in it, and your writing and attention to detail are impeccable. I know you haven't posted since November of 2016, but I hold out hope above all else that you'll return to us and finish

You're amazing, I hope all is well in your life, and I hope to see you soon~

Reading through this in 2018 makes me a little depressed, and not from chapter 13. It makes me dissapointed as this is likely the best story I have read in my time here, and withmessages saying it will continue. I just hope that this story may one day continue from the teaser for the next chapter. It has been 2 years sense any writing activity, but I hold out hope. If I am mistaken, please correct me, I hope I am wrong.

Without the tease at the end, I think that’s a perfectly fine place to end the story. It’s powerfully ambiguous.

Hey there, V. (Is it ok if I call you that? I can't quite remember your name and am too lazy to go back and look) I just recently read all of this stories chapters, and I have got to say: this is really one of a kind. I've been shipping Lulu and Veigar ever since I started playing, and this is my favorite story of them of all time. Hell, if this was the actual story of Lulu and Veigar (aside from the Cub) and if your interpretation of veigars backstory is really in the game, I would go to your house and give you anything gift I could send. Of course this is extreme, but I'M NOT A STALKER, ITS JUST AN ANALOGY. I just really love this story, so detailed in every step.
Now, V, I still have to give some negative feedback. And it's not the story. Or the writing. However, it's been over 4 years since this was last posted on, and every fanfic about Lulu x veigar that I've read that's good has either been 1 chapter or is just like this one: not finished. Normally I was fine: but this time, you really did me one V. This is too damn good and too damn off for you to end this now. Excusing me for my cursing, but this is a fu*king masterpiece. You can't just end it here! I want to see the healing of the 2 girls, amumu raging against teemo and finding veigar, veigar finding happiness with lulu, gnar being gnar, lulu no longer sick,MORE LEMONS OF VEIGAR AND LULU, or whatever shit you have to come. You promised us a good ending, but haven't posted in a while. I'm really aching for the first time about this. I really want to see more! And if I have to, maybe in a couple more years, if you don't update, I might revive this and write on myself. Which I really don't want to do, your writing is way too good for me to live up to.
So I beg you, please come back. This is way too good to be missed. I don't care if you complete change the story, I want more and a good ending. Your writing is amongst JK Rowling, John Green, and more in my standards.
Sorry for my rant. In all sincerity, you are truly a writer that really made me jump at some parts. This story is too good.
Tim Huang

This is by far one of the best fanfics I've ever read. Every character is so real and awesome I cried a couple times. Please update whenever you feel ready to do it. We will all be waiting patiently for your next masterpiece

Hey so I've been following this story since the beginning and let me tell you, I've literally kept this tab saved on my browser (phone ofc) for a damn long time, hoping you would update. The first time I waited was a whole 6 months before you updated, next was 10 months, and now just over a year. Each time during these long periods of complete silence from you, I would begin to lose hope of the story ever being updated, and each time you finally returned. What I'm basically trying to say is, don't let this story die. I've been following since 7th grade and I'm now a graduating senior in highschool and of all the fanfics i've kept tabs on for many months, this is the only story that has managed to stay on my browser since I started using . I've seen many other veigarxlulu stories but no one has ever come close to the level of character development, emotional roller coasters, as well as never managing to go out of character; that you have. I have tried other sites beside and its impossible for me to enjoy anything else besides this story whether due to absolutely horrendous grammar, zero character development, and by far the worst of all, characters that are so out of character, that I just can't read anything else but this. Believe me I have read this story quite a few times and have always loved how damn creative each chapter has been. Apologies for this horribly written wall of text that I'm currently typing on my phone, but please come back. I STILL BELIEVE IN THE RETURN OF THE GREATEST AUTHOR FOR THIS OTP FOR ALL OF ETERNITY!
Pls come back Vitalus, I miss you :(

I love this story so... when will it return It was a cliffhanger as if you taken a vegetables life support,, Please I need more of this I beg of you YOU ARE SO GREAT AT THIS PLEASE DONT STOP

Ayy, nice job right there! I am very hyped for the full chapter!

Anyway, what are your plans about the Voidlings? Not the small, scorpion one but the big guys such as Cho'gath and Vel'koz. Are you going to put them in the story? If so, are they going to be some sort of companion for Lulu and Veigar? Or will they try to kill them off? Or both?

I take back everything I sad negative about this fanfic - a couple of chapters after 8 fell like their own oneshots without a linear storyline but it soon got back on track. Keep up the good work :)

I know that my opinion will differ from almost all of the other readers but I think that you should've just kept the sad ending and cut the story off here.
The last few paragraphs of the first ending were reaching Shakespear levels of tragedy, and if you ended it there, it would have been the perfect bittersweet ending.
However, you kept the story going and now the following chapters (That I have read) kinda feel like a poor excuse to keep on writing.
BTW this is NOT hate.
It's constructive criticism. :)