Reviews for Winter |
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peppe1951 chapter 4 . 9/21/2017 Good story |
ladyaloysius chapter 4 . 12/27/2013 ISO enjoyed myself! |
Gibbs4Eva chapter 4 . 12/10/2013 Loved it! |
Laura Ann chapter 2 . 12/6/2013 I like it so far! Gibbs is such a great father figure. It amazes me how Tony will jump out of almost-a-coma at Gibbs sharp voicing of his name. They're the perfect father and son. Thank you for sharing this with us. |
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 4 . 12/6/2013 Nice glad Tony wasnt deadly sick and it wasnt to long of a hospital stay. |
peggyal chapter 4 . 12/5/2013 Nice story, very succinct, but revealing of the characters |
Buckeye am I chapter 4 . 12/5/2013 Like I tell many writers/authors, the length of the chapter doesn't matter. (oh, by the way, I have seen all lengths of chapters. I think at least one of the stories I read it is normal for a chapter to be about 5,000 words. But then others I've read have been just a few hundred per chapter.) You tell the story. What is in the chapter is what is needed to tell the story. (I'm only against "fluffy filler" in order to lengthen a chapter.) Good story. Tony needed help. He has great friends. |
angelscatie chapter 4 . 12/5/2013 Great story |
DS2010 chapter 4 . 12/4/2013 Only tony can get pneumonia and the flu at the same time. Yuck. |
DS2010 chapter 3 . 12/4/2013 Glad abby showed up with provisions. poor tony. |
AmyH chapter 4 . 12/4/2013 Poor Tony! Glad he is on the mend though. I really liked this - it seems the series writers have all but forgotten Tony's plague and issues he might have due to the disease's effects. Nicely done! |
DS2010 chapter 2 . 12/4/2013 Poor Tony being sick. Good thing gibbs showed up |
Buckeye am I chapter 2 . 12/4/2013 still here and still reading. |
Guest chapter 2 . 12/4/2013 Not sure anyone can take two Advil when they are semi-conscious. |
Guest chapter 4 . 12/4/2013 Short and sweet, I love it! Just what I need to make me smile! :) |