Reviews for A wish for something more
Reality check chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
No hope doesn't get an adult body back because lightning turns back the hands of time by using the chaos next time does the damage that was done by the paradoxes and the chaos and by doing so hopefully its back to his 12 year old body everything the first back to before the chaos took effect grand pulse will and the real Serah Farron is dead she could not be resurrected because of the way she died at the end of Final Fantasy 13 2 when the Fl Ci destroyed both crystals it's scattered the souls the souls across the astral plane and what you seeing is a when he died he left behind an echo of themselves and chaos took on the form of the echo left behind that is why the not the real individuals and that's why they had powers that would not normal any game mog refer to serah daughter of chaos & referring to Nolan servant of time cuz she wasn't living being she was an echo of someone who died and crystal that is why Serah was given the gift and a curse of the eyes of the goddess there's only one inside
Ivonnebagel12 chapter 1 . 6/7/2015
*Flails arms*
THIS WAS AMAZING. I lost count of how many times I squealed, laughed, and gushed. Lord help me that was just wonderful!
Great great job!
Cynical Asshole chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
So sad to see our FFXIII friends acting like the stupid, immature, shallow, scumbag earthlings...wasting potential and thereby destroying the future is what we do best here, after all...

I agree with Hope; if I was sitting on undiscovered secrets of quantum physics, I wouldn't share them with a species that was just going to throw it all down the drain either.

I've read and enjoyed some of your stories before, but this one needed a serious dose of maturity. I'm not trying to be mean, just honest. The ending scene with Hope and Lightning was mostly good, but the idea of putting drunken stupidity on par with Renaissance artwork is one of the reasons why the future of this world is far bleaker than Nova Chrysalia's ever was. It just makes the whole thing seem like a complete waste; from one doomed world to another. There's no point in fighting for a future that's already drowning in the bullshit of the present.
Crush-Chan17 chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
Vanille and Fang! You sneaky girls. xD I absolutely loved this! It's so interesting that you made Hope have to grow up again. Imagine school. Hahah. And poor Lightning, trying to fight her feelings because he's underage.
kwerk chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
This was really cute. I like how hope has grown past the pure idealist he used to be. When the story mentioned the nova chrysalia people just came to earth all at once, I kinda pictured a District 9 scenario (that would have been horrible). If you do write more, it would be great to go into those first years at earth, the tests they had to go through, finding each other, etc...
Loki'dWendy chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
Fang's a genius. I vote that she becomes the queen of Earth.
Dragnarok chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
I like it! Please make another few chapters. I'd like to see light and hope's future together.
Arista chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
That's such a good theory about the "otherworlders" or people from "crystallia nova" etcetc omg
unknown chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
Dang lol what was a nice fanfic :)
GETH Prime chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
Make both a Sequel and a Prequel( When the gang first arrived in earth)
allcreation7151129 chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
This was adorable! 3

Even though I prefer older Hope in the new world, I'm not opposed to him being physically 14 as long as he is mentally older. The idea of an older!Hope in a younger Hope's body is interesting because it takes a different spin on how Hope copes with the remnants of Bhunivelze's control. Gosh, even though he's like physically 17, Hope still retains the hotness and maturity of older!Hope here. It was great!
jytr5u67578lk8u chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
This is fantastic! Your confident and determined Hope is adorable :)
darkpassenger815 chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
goodness this was adorable! so I must ask, are you going to be continuing this? cause I actually think it'd be pretty interesting to explore their earth lives and their reaction to earth's various ways of life. soooooo im just suggesting that you write some stuff about their earth lives! idk its just an idea haha anyway great job on this story! definitely gonna get a fav from me :D
Rayark chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
Awww! That's so cute, although i prefer Hope have changed backto his adult-body when they came to Earth.