Nice one shot.

I actually don't think is is OOC for Haru. I could totally see him being like that, especially with her. I think they would make a really cute couple. I could just imagine how much shit he'd have to go through with Rin in order to date her. I really liked this tho. Thank you for sharing.

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There are some grammatical inconsistencies but it is 5am and I cannot check them for you right now.

I left a very complete review on your other fic, The Little Mermaid, which I loved for reasons different to this one. But I loved this one as well omg. Do you KNOW how much I love your Haruka? The whole thing was perfect, perfect comparisons and descriptions. I love what you said about the Matsuoka siblings - I believe that too!

I am relatively new to the Free! fandom in that I've read very little and written only one short vignette (SouGou) because I am still getting familiar with the versions I have of them in my head. But after reading you I feel I need to write more het fics; this fandom really needs them, haha.

Great work! I can't wait to see what else you write.

This was great and really well writtten. Good job.

I'm so in love with this pairing, thank you so much for writing it!

well tnx for writing harugaou., even ur a makogou...

Haru's a guy with simple needs and wants. He needs water, he wants Mackarel but Gou on the other hand, he needs her and wants her.

I love thiiiis! Its awesome, however you are right there are some grammar lapses when it comes to past tenses and the works but its not terrible, i would suggest to find a beta or something

Truly amazing! I love the premise of exploring Haru's obsessions until we eventually reach the apparently biggest one of all, which is Gou herself. That was hot and I do not think Haru was OOC, I agree w you that the tsundere ones tend to be passionate in bed, like shoring their true colours. Excellent work and hope you write more!

I just fell in love with Haru more.

Lol. If the anime ever did a Kou/Haru pairing this is probably how it would be. So fitting

Love it. :) We needs more HaruGou!

I'm liking the obsessed Haru, it definitely makes sense considering his constant attention towards water and mackerel. The smut was sweet and I love his obsession with Gou. x)

Hahahaha it's always the quiet ones XD oh wow. Anyways you're right about the lack of the harugou smut on here