This is still my favorite Thundermans fic! Very well written! :)

Great story, well written.

This is really well written and generally well done, I really enjoyed reading it!

Loved it, I'm such an angst sucker so great job

THAT WAZ AMAZE BALLS PLZ MAKE MOR PLZ

such a beautiful story. i enjoy your phoebe and max a lot. on the topic of abuse, the fiction is very in key, to the publics of it. c: well done! xx

that are awsome i love it make more i love Jira i hope they be come each other in realy life

Teach me your ways of writing so perfectly in character bc I need to know.. Also I am so in love w this I hope that u continue or possibly write more for them?

That was a nice piece. I love caring!Max

Nori able end

Interesting. :) I've always had an idea for the Thundermans, but I have too many stories to work on it. XD I've always wondered - if Max plans to be a villain, how would his relationship with Phoebe work out? If they're both on opposite sides, wouldn't one eventually lead to destroying the other? I thought of that situation ever since I watched the show, and I just thought that I'd lay it out for anybody out there who's planning to make a story about them. Wink wink. ;) XD I loved it! And though the ending was kinda underwhelming, I lived the story as a whole. Besides, I'm not much of an ender too.

What a brilliant story!

Love max's soft side

I dont really like tht Phoebe cant use her super powers on him...secretly that is

That's so cute.