Hi the link in your bio isn't working :(

Could you maybe fix it because I really want to read the sex scene! Love your story btw

That was amazing, beautiful yet somber storyline and captivating plot twists.
Even though some may think that it's out of character for both Ciel and Sebastian to behave like this, I feel as if you've done your best to maintain their character traits under the circumstances they were put under.
So, kudos to you for that!

Love!

Oh my glob I can't even! All the sweetness!

please update soon would love to read more

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aww dont tell me its overrr

"Well at least the Dursleys never tried to stangle Harry Potter" Im dying here

Please continue this is so gooooddd

I have to say I'm disappointed by this fiction. It's a nice story which explores some popular themes, has a good balance of drama, angst and romance, but the thing that really led me to leave this review is that I feel like it has literally nothing to do with kuroshitsuji. Your characters have no traits that Ciel and Sebastian typically display. It would be better as a stand-alone piece of original fiction. Please take this as constructive criticism, it is not a flame or intended to disrespect your hard work, but I don't see how your Sebastian is anything like the kuroshitsuji charactereverything from his speech and mannerisms to his aptitudes and tendencies just fall short of the sharp, clever man that he is. Now of course this is an AU, Sebby's not a demon and would be a little different, but it just isn't him. The same goes for Ciel. Despite all the abuse and misfortune that he experiences (in your story and in the show/manga) Ciel is defined by his stubborn strength, by his cunning and ability to manage situations rationally regardless of his feelings. I just really didn't see that here and it made me sad because I liked this story, I read most of it, but I'm letting it go as of Chapter 17.
Please keep writing, keep learning and improving and don't let one criticism take the wind from your sails! You have wonderful potential!

Okay gonna be 100% honest here. This story is freaking amazing. It's been awhile since I've read a story this freaking good! Sorry just had to let that out. Lol.

Well, I usually don't leave review but... with this fiction I must.
I love really much the story and I find it really pleasant to read (I don't have any difficulties to understand at all. English is not my first langage).
I really like the Ciel - Sebastian relationship, it's really cute !
I really really hope that you'll not stop this good fiction. It's been ages since I've read something this good. I read all that in one day and I need more of this !
Take your time to write if you need but I'll be there as soon as you post the next chapter !
Thanks a lot for this story !

with ciel-as soon as he is happy fate steps in & kicks him in the balls

"The story isn't over yet"? I call bullshit. Last updated 2 years ago.

Oh my god that scared the shit out of me