This is one of the best fanfics I have read keep going!

Fera the bewildered bewilderbeast. nice plot so far, tho it doesnt really have a villain to make the story more awsome. its still good, tho.

Amazing

I took a Latin class in school, and your translations are correct.

Well this story was a nice one, ecepting for a few chapter, this story was good. so now move to the 3 part thanks.

Ok I not get this 2 last chapter. first you send hiccup on a mission that he dont not which are, and for what long, and second you put astrid pregnant again and hiccup no return for like 9 month and astrid have the baby whit out hiccup there? this 2 chapter no make much sense.

well as much I like this story that is very nice. I fund weird that you using the dragon to much like they are human beings, even that they are intelligent that no mean that they can write or act like human. oh another thing Berk is no to big and have now 2 giants dragon walk on the village is no much credible and that the people not notice a giant dragon ether.

Twins that is great that you use that, but I not like much that you use Draco and camicazi as the name for the twins first Draco is the name for the villain in HTTYD 2 and camicazi is the Astrid version for the books. I thing that you should have use more original names for hiccup and astrid kids.

That was a good massage in the end, and heather back and she is going to live on berk that is nice too.

yes this is a cool chapter. but the only thing is bothers me is why snotlout and the twins attack Mortem, and stoick only punishment was take out the weapons for a week. the rest was nice

well this was a nice chapter, so at the end astrid is more accepting the baby.

Well that was fast hiccup and Astrid they going to have a baby that is great . I just want to know what age the have in this story.

You're the legend in my book.

Violet.

Reminds my of my cat, loves giving the puppy eyes when she wants bacon. Such a cannibalistic cat.