This was a good story but two things Ash wears a baseball cap not a visor and it was Pikachu who is running at Catnea with Quick attack not Ash but still good and if only team Rocket was their so James could see his Catnea evolve into Caturne and nice that Gardenia let Ash share her Hamock with her and she shouldn’t be worried since she Loves Grass type Pokemon means she can’t love other people Gardenia could be attracted too people who has a Grass type or who are masters of Grass type too and since Ash has had like Four Grass type Pokemon from his journey it would not be a surprise if she did like Ash and here are some ideas for future Grass type chapters 1, AdvanceShipping (May) since she has a Venasaur 2, Amshipping (Mairin) 3, gentleGardenialovershippimgm(Layla Movie) since she has a Connection to Shaymin 4, Pavilion shipping (Diana) because she has a connection to Celebi 5, Sessionshipping (Angela) 6, Grinshipping (Sonrisa) 7, Bailey 8, Petral 9, Natasha Since she has Grovile.

This was a good story but 3 things 1, Clemont left temporary in a previous Episode to prepare for his gym battle with Ash before they arrived back at Luminous City 2, Ash and the gang have meet Alexa again since the Gym battle at Santalune city they saw it during the episode with the Fossol Pokemon Amaura and Aurorus and 3, i didn’t like how you make Alexa that one moment talk like Iris but still good I liked that That Vivillon that Ash and the gang saved from that Pokemon pocher made a return and i that Butterfree reference and nice that Viola gave Ash advise on Photographic Memory and nice that she Kissed ash twice and I guess by Alexa’s reaction to Viola kissing Ash that she has a secret crush on him it and here are some ideas for future Bug type chapters 1, FifthlabShipping (Professor Juniper) since you have already used Fennel 2, AdvanceShipping (May) since she has a Breuityfly 3, Mina Trial captain and Artist 4, Cassandra who has a Parasect 5, Rebecca (Sinnoh).

This was a good story and nice that Ash got a second trophy from Prima/Lorolei for Honorary trainer and nice that she told Misty that she needed to tell Ash how she felels sometime but I don’t get why in the anime Lorolei’s name was changed to Prima I hope if she reappears in the anime someday she will be known by Lorolei in the future and here are ideas for future Ice type chapters 1, Takecareshipping (Leona) 2, Releasedshipping (Soledad) 3, Pokeshippingn(Misty) since she has a Seal 4, Slatotoiseshipping (Neesha) since she had a Dougoung 5, Erica (Hoenn) 5, Cehra the Pokejump sludge champion 6, Marilyn (Sinnoh) who has a Shellder.

This was a good story and nice that Ash was telling Bonnie what Love is realy about at least the best way he can also you should of had him also say that two other of his Companions May and Max where the Kids of a Gym leader and here are some ideas for future Fairy type chapters 1, Amourshipping (Serena) since she has a Syilveon 2, Ourstatueshipping (Mirror Bonnie) 3, Circusshipping (Stella) 4, PearlShipping (Dawn) since she has a Togakiss 5, Cehra the Pokejump sledge champion 6, Mina the Artest/Trial captain.

This was a good story but you didn't have to put too much on Ash's slowness to Understanding love but still good and im surprised that you didn't have Brock be upset like Dawn was on Ash getting kissed by Marnie i get why not from Paige but still good also i think Paige ment to say You should consider yourself Lucky not Happy and i find it funny when Ash said he wad Glad he was an only child but later in the first Episode of the XY Anime he said he wished he had a Brother or Sister to Travel with and i don't have any ideas for future Ghost type chapters yet.

This was a good story and it would be funny if Brock found out about Ash getting kissed by Melody and now its seams she was Ash's first kiss before Serena and i agree with her being for Flying and here are some ideas for future Flying type chapters 1, Hollystockshipping (Holly) 2, Welcomecustomshipping (Carol) 3, Backwardhatshipping (Maron) since their both has a connection to Lugia 4, HerowatchShipping (Kate) 5, Kahili the Pokegolf Champion 6, Miki that Girl with Skamory.

This was a good story and nice one with using the Champearl evolution line to promote Hoenn and nice think with the underwater Research and here are some ideas for future Water type chapters 1, Pokeshipping (Misty) 2, Muchwatershipping (Marina) from the Orange islands 3, Slastoiseshipping (Neesha) 4, Nomadshipping (Lizabeth) because of her connection to manaphy 5, Badtempershipping (Katie) 6, Discoveredshipping (Whilhomene) 7, Pokesurfshipping (Cissy) 8, Releasedshipping (Soladad).

This is a good story but you had Ash ask Anabel why shes away from the Battle Palace not The battle Tower at the beginning and May was gping to Johto to complete in the contests not the league and Max didn't want to go back home at first but still good and nice that Anabel had shown Ash her Feeling so now he knows love and nice that Espeon stopped them from walking into a of Team rockets Pits and it was nice Ash's didn't destrub their kissing and here are some Ideas for future Pyschic types chapters 1, Chimetuneshipping (Fransesica) 2, AdvancetwinShipping (Liza hoenn) 3, Hykaukkashipping (Olympia) 4, Humbleshipping (Concordia) 5, Tenderheartshipping (Anthea) 6, Onlyawish/HairShipping (Kelly) 7, Herowatchshipping (Kate) 8, Tradebattleshipping (Kathaine) 9, Lanuitshipping (Elise) 10, Circusshipping (Stella) 11, Grace (Hoenn).

This was a good story and nice that Ash went Christmas shopping with Cynthia and it was funny seeing all their Attempts at stealing Pikachu fail but in the end Ash got them presents becauce of the special time of the year and it was nice that they replyed Ash for it and does this story take place before the Maid cafe episode and is that why you didn't mention it when Ash told Cynthia of his crossdressing in the past and here are some ideas for future Dragon type chapters 1, Emma the girl from that BW episode 2, Latias since i can,t think of they others and only if you don't mind human and Pokemon pairing.

This was a good story nice that Iris was nice to Ash at the begining only for it change after that Kiss and it was that Elder Aproved of Shannon liking Ash and i think Iris was overeacting to her best friend kissing Ash which ended the idea of Shannon traveling with them but their was an incurietey with the story like earler Ash said he had completed in the Unova already but at the end said it was time to head their which in the anime they went to the Village of Dragons before going to the Unova League but still good andvi like that Shannon conferted about his eventual loss and her are some ideas for future Dark type chapters 1, Backpackshipping (Peg) 2, BurningTrainer/Talonflameshipping (Malva) 3, Sectionshipping (Angela) 4, CheekmarkShipping (Mightyena Preformer) who doesn't have an Official name.

This was a good story Ash and Marble were able to get Team Rocket Arrested and it was nice that she helped Ash hurt his Foot and it was funny that Luxray stole Crugunk's job of stopping Brock from Flirting with girls and it was nice that Marble stole a kiss from Ash by acussing him of Stealing her heart and here are some ideas for future Electric type chapters 1, Backviewshipping (Solana) 2, Cinamativeshipping (Jean) from the Pikachu movie maker episode 3, Ourstatuseshipping (Mirror Bonnie) 4, Pikala from the Pikachu vally.

This was a good story and I was nice that we got to see Ash do some abit of Marshal arts in this story and it was interesting that Ash got two kisses from. chigusa first was accidentally and the other was intended and nice that Team Rocket got stopped before they could do their plan by Ash eventough it was unintended and here are some ideas for future Fighting type chapters 1, Arenashipping (Greta) 2 Heroemergeshipping (Allegra) 3, ThicsShipping (Wicke) because of her connection to Stufful 4, Advanceshipping (May) 5, Grace (Hoenn).

Genial

Very cute

Another good series