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NoboOdY chapter 12 . 7/24 damn such a bad spot to end on. This was updated 3 years ago is this fic dead? Ive read a lot of 1st generation time travel fics but this has to be one of my favorites. Tsuna doesnt immedeately become past vongolas allies and he doesnt actively go looking for them or stupidly out himself like in many other fics. I find that really refreshing. I couldnt help but notice a little mix up between Lampo and Lambo in the last chapter.(Giotto was talking about lampo and Ricardo). Im not very good when it comes to giving serious criticism in writing unless flaws are super obvious, sorry. Great story. Hope your doing well |
daliapv.perez chapter 11 . 7/24 Tú PD fue gracioso me gustó. |
daliapv.perez chapter 12 . 7/24 Maravillosa historia la amo espero que pronto actualices |
Guest chapter 12 . 7/4 je veux voir la suite ! |
Princess1410 chapter 1 . 6/9 Ou est la suite ? J'attend ! |
tasyadewi16 chapter 12 . 2/22 i miss u author-chan... update please ~ |
Codename-SN chapter 12 . 2/10 Man and we're at a crucial part of the story! Damn ugh guess I'll die |
Guest chapter 12 . 11/17/2019 What's should I do so that you motivate to continue writing? I really miss your writing.. Thanks for all the hard work with brain... I knew it's hard... |
Synchronicity911 chapter 10 . 9/6/2019 And "A very polite invitation" by Dream Charmer, this man actually wrote the Varia. |
Synchronicity911 chapter 1 . 9/5/2019 Found some more good things: "Inheritors of Flame" by Kyogre, best game ever! Summary: AU. The virtual reality world of the game "Inheritors of Flame" is a place where you can become anyone. Even Dame-Tsuna can become a strong, confident guild master and gain many close friends. But the game isn't just a game. It could very well hold the key to the secrets of the world, and the fabled Trinisette. "War Torn" by CamsthiSky Summary: Waking up to find you're waist deep into a war you didn't remember ever happening can be disorienting for any fourteen year old boy, especially after bringing his friends back to a past safe from Byakuran's reign. And yet, Tsuna can't help but think dealing with Byakuran would be better than this. Oh well, what was that saying? "If you're going through hell, keep going." "The Varia Next Door" by RenegadeWarrior Summary: AU. At the sound of loud noises, five-year-old Tsuna gazed out of his bedroom window only to see several moving trucks with an unfamiliar emblem. Follow along as Tsuna grows up with his strange terrifying new neighbors. Familial!Varia "Tomorrow's Lessons" by Kwizzic Summary: When Tsuna flunks his math final, Nana Sawada decides it's time to put her foot down and get her son a tutor. Shoichi never realized he'd be teaching a kid his own age. "When Lightning Strikes Twice" by yoshi-in-the-club Summary: When Lambo Bovino, a 25 year-old at the end of his rope, threw that grenade, this was definitely not what he expected. Time Travel/Semi-AU. No Pairings. "Failure" by AutumnsFey Summary: Iemitsu had been so excited to see his family finally again. What he hadn't really expected was the door smashing in his face, or his son being a curious mix of just awakening sky and disgruntled teenager. But he had all the time in the world to fix this ... right? It's not as if this was last chance, Tsuna would forgive him, he always did. And still, his Intuition screamed... "As If In Prayer" by Seito Summary: "With his brows always furrowed and fist swung as if in prayer, that is Vongola Decimo…" Tsuna let the words he had heard so often, fall from his lips. Nono was the first to say it to him and he had heard Yuni say it as well. But where had the phrase come from? When had they started using it to describe him? Tag to: Semblance of a Prayer "Surprises are Always Fun" Draegwyn Summary: There's a lot that people think they know about Sawada Tsunayoshi. Like the fact that he's unusually bad at everything. And that he has the weirdest habits. And the strangest family. But 'Dame Tsuna's' many and varied associates are about to learn that there is far more to the class loser than they ever imagined. A series of one shots focusing on people learning about the mafia. "Rewound" by Sakura Hyuga, good time-travel Summary: They called him Neo Vongola Primo, the second coming of the esteemed First...Tsuna doesn't really think that people meant it like this. /In which Vongola Decimo Tsuna wakes up as a blond, five year-old orphan named Giotto./ Tsuna!Giotto "The wide sky embraces it all" by WrongLady Sawada Tsunayoshi, Vongola Decimo, wakes up in a parallel world, where his guardians aren't his guardians anymore. Instead they follow another candidate of the title 'Vongola Decimo'. Thrown back in the body of a 15-year-old middle school boy he refuses to ignore is friends and looks out for them if needed. |
Synchronicity911 chapter 12 . 8/26/2019 And it would be nice if you explained on Tsuna's POV why he was supposed to follow Malvagio with visions of the future? It was only vague for me. |
Synchronicity911 chapter 11 . 8/26/2019 Hi, I'm a fairly new reader but obviously have a big flaw in the latest update and I was surprised that none of the tons of readers showed you. I'm pretty sure 'the brunet' fighting the fire against Durante in Chapter 9 was Tsuna and at that moment Giotto slammed his sky flames into his face, but then you described a completely different story about Giotto seeing Tsuna fight back to Vindice.. It's really absurd in my opinion. Therefore, I think you should rewrite this lost chapter in a better way to track your old plot. If you have time, re-reading the story from the beginning will definitely help. Maybe you can refer to these little pieces to restore your inspiration :) You Must not Have Known Him by Bleach-ed-Na-tsu Summary: Hinoe Sho was attending his cousin's funeral, he hadn't known the young man (and young he was, barely twenty when he died) but he seemed a pathetic sort. Easily forgotten apparently, since none of the young man's closest friends had come to see him off. There he meets an equally strange young man who says he knew Tsunayoshi Sawada well, but Sho didn't think so. Wasted Youth and Full Circle by Luki Dimension These are two different perspectives of the same character on the same issue: ten year bazooka! These completely changed my mind about Lambo. Man, your Hyper Intuition: Double-Edged Sword definitely deserves to be added. Hope they're useful. |
LavaLilly chapter 12 . 5/1/2019 So about that new chapter |
Vongola10 chapter 12 . 11/10/2018 Please continue with your story I love it |
Zodiac Goddess chapter 12 . 4/14/2018 I’ve officially been slapped, theoretically, with a cliffhanger... in other words, I shall be sitting here until the next update... |