Pls continue this story. Its awesome

Please update, it’s been 4 years!

;-; the story is so great awesome sweet sad ;-;

Look this is awesome but to make it a little touching you have to put some memories of Anna and elsa and other kind of try to make elsa not kiss Anna a lot in the forehead because when you repeat the same subject over and over it will be boring but the story is awesome I even bookmarked it and always check on it but you are not writing hopefully you will continue. Stay awesome man

Please continue to this!

How does Hans give the letter to Elsa? You also doesn’t explain how Hans get the information about Elsa and Anna’s whereabouts.. You should write about the encounter of Elsa and Hans after Elsa decides to turn herself in..

So, the head of the village name his children Elsa and Anna.. It only mean that he really loves his ruler.. When Anna said to Elsa that she doesn’t want to share Elsa, it also mean that Elsa is really a great big sister just like what little Elsa has said..

Olaf doesn’t come to life before the great Thaw? Now I’m really confuse.. Why Olaf come to life after the event in Frozen movie? If they are no alive Olaf before Anna froze, who help Anna get out of the room that she’s locked in by Hans?

So, Hans has his own sorcerer that help him to achieve his goal.. What is the sorcerer’s power which has made the arrow that Hans used during his encounter with Elsa so strong that it can break through Elsa’s ice?

Kristoff counting to reach 30 minutes is just like Olaf counting to 60 when Anna asks him to give her a minute before she enter the ice palace in Frozen movie.. I have never imagine that Kristoff could even think of doing that.. Does he not have any device to count time?

You should give us an explanation on how the arrow can break through Elsa’s ice.. So, there’s someone else who has special power.. Is Hans the one who also has some special power? But that’s impossible considering he didn’t have any special power in Frozen movie..

I thought the event in this story occurred after all that happen in Frozen movie.. But I was wrong.. So, this is the first time Kristoff meets Elsa and Anna.. So, that mean Anna didn’t meet Kristoff at Wandering Oaken's Trading Post.. Then, who help Anna go to the trolls when Elsa accidentally struck Anna in the heart? Anna is unconscious when she was taken to the trolls at the age of 5..

Anna asking her sister to build a snowman in the middle of conference is really not proper.. And just because Elsa couldn’t do it right away, Anna locked herself in her room and refuse to eat or talk.. It’s not that Elsa doesn’t want to play with her, Elsa’s just busy at the moment.. Elsa even told Anna that she will play with her after the conference end.. Anna should understand that Elsa has a huge responsibility as a queen..

This is freaking amazing! I love it! You have to write more. I sayed up until midnight reading the whole thing. really, I could sit here and read this for hours on end. I can not wait to see if you have written more. Great job, and keep upthe amazing work! :)

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