I really like this story, how is has some good balances and how you portray the characters to match the setting. Good job!

ah need moare. please.

Streetlights, people, up and down the boulevard their shadows searching in the niiiiiggghhhtt streetlights, people livin' just to find emotion, hidin' somewhere in the niiiiiigggggghhhhht!
luv u r story tayrox an' on your next story can you say how good this song connects to this one called city lights
TOHRUANDKYO
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Woah such a cute ending! Thank you for the story

Such a nice story! hoping for a sequel :3

'Gliding across the room like a snake'?
You mean Ayame? X3

Ryxtel: YAAAAAAY! OMG I FREAKING LOVE THIS! :D
Tyler: That is so Kawaii freaking Desu.
Thorn: So true.
Ryxtel: Amazing fan fiction, SoKai all the way, number XV out! *does a mock salute*

I can soooo see this happening! -

Haha

Awwwwwwwwww! How cute, i love it! Great job with the story, it was really good.

Yaaay, he was able to save her! This makes me inexplicably happy for some reason! XD

"So did you enjoy the sunset?"

...I thought it was the sunrise? o.O Just pointing that out there...

Out of all places to sit, why did Kyou have to sit in the middle of the street? Even though there weren't any cars around, that was especially stu-silly of him. Mostly because he himself witnessed a car accident, the girl calling him back in the house is the daughter of the victim in the accident, and wow that's all sorts of messed up. o.O! Other than that, the story seems interesting. So far. :P

I love this story so much! Ah, I sqealed like a fangirl the entire time I read it! Good job, this is freaking amazing!

Awwwww...! Sooooo cute! Update soon!:)