I know it's been 3 years 10 months since you last update but I'm seriously hope you have not give up on this story because I'm really enjoying it. I like that Skye fainted and Grant caught her before her head hit the ground. I like that they moved Skye to her bunk but Skye keep interfering with the bus technology. I love that Grant brought Skye into the interrogation room. I like that Skye was thinking personal stuff. awww I love the skyeward interrogation scene. I love that Grant stood by Skye, most likely watching her sleep. I like that Grant comforted Skye. I like that Grant feels guilty over it. awww poor Grant. I love the ending Skyeward scenes. They make sense to me. I love it. I hope we get to learn more about the town, skyeward's kidnappers and how they were caught. Poor Grant thinking Skye was dead. also I hope we get to see more skyeward before they got kidnapped and tortured. Great work. I'm loving this story.

I love the skyeward scenes. I like that Skye hacked and donate other peoples money to charity. I like that she gambled. I love the skyeward flashback scenes. I like that Grant and skye showed signs of powers already. I like that Skye feels comfortable around Grant to bring up her past. I like that robot in shiny metal comment. I like that Grant got Skye to watch out for danger. I like that Grant burned the kitchen. I doubt Skye would know how to cook but I do like that she can in your story. I like that Grant was working and let Skye put her feet on his lap. I love love love the beginning scene where skye almost falls to the ground but Grant catches her. yeah Skye found Grant. I love the skyeward scenes. I like how even thought Grant is the one being saved that he is still protecting Skye. I like that Grant think that his kidnappers were torturing him. I like that Grant didn't want to let go of Skye. Great chapter. I really enjoyed it.

I like it. I like the Jemma/Skye scenes. I like that Skye cries out for Grant in her sleep. I like the skyeward scene. I love the scene where Skye and Grant jump out the bus. I love the Skye ending scenes. I like that her powers are cause by radiation. I like that the team saw Grant and skye is using the big screen to talk to the team because of her powers. I'm exited to read more.

I love the flashback, especially the interactions between Grant/Skye. I like that Skye does stupid things to protect her friends.I like that Grant and Skye were practise the same move over and over again. I like that Skye is getting better but Grant still beliefs there is room for improvement. I like that Skye sat on Grant and Grant pushed her off him. I like the present Scene. I like Skye powers, pretty cool I think. I like that she saw Grant. I like the cliffhanger sort of you left it on. well done.

Congratulation on your first fic, I think it takes guts to upload your work for the world to see. I like how Skye didn't want to leave Grant but she did anyway. I like that Grant told Skye to run. I like that Skye has nightmares. I like that they team don't want to push Skye but they need to know what happens. well done.

Will this be continued? It is such a great story.

AGH YOU NEED TO UPDATE SOON!

When's the next story coming out? Thanks!

I'm curious, so clearly I'm following ;)

I'm confused a bit, but this fic is good. Really cool. ;)

Aww I loved this update, I can't wait for more. Also maybe you could put a little bit in the next chapter or so on the memories which were broadcast around the bus? Because Skye being in the foster system and running away form the orphanage etc, I'm sure that most of the stories are real and heartbreaking. Thanks :)

Yeah Ward angst! Thanks for makin my day better by updating this! Great job!
Good luck on ur transfer, and I hope you can get ur feet back under you as quick as possible! Best of luck!

Great chapter and I can't wait to find out more about what happened. Also I get what you mean I love the Olympics but the 4 weeks are taking FOREVER.

Great chapter! Loved it!

Your wonderful i love the mistery ! please continue it soon i love it :D