dude ive been waiting a whole year for an update plz continue wit the story

And I'm finally up-to-date with Sights!

Woot woooooot

Ohhhh
A stealthy archaeologist.

Paper powers
Tis gonna be interesting

Ahahahahahaha
Brilliance!

Two alliances xD
Amaaaaaazing twist xDDDD

Before anything.

JESUS F***ING CHRIST! I HONESTLY THOUGHT SOMEONE CAPTURED WAYLAND YOU CRAZY MEAN SON OF A- I AM SO GLAD I DECIDED TO JUST BULK READ AFTER A BUNCH OF CHAPTERS CAME OUT INSTEAD OF READING IT ONE AT A TIME AND SUFFER WAITING FOR WHAT COMES NEXT

God I got a mini heart attack.

Anyway. Things seems to be going kind of great so far, great in terms that now they have medicine for James, Wayland is awake and possible new crew member, yay! Though things seems to be going down hill too with this crazy as fuck vice admiral on Bellona's shoes and possibly Kelda's too.

Though I am curious about the Revolutionaries after Dragon and Sabo, I suppose I'll just have to wait and see how they fit into this whole thing. Also, I'm glad that you know that Skypiea is just one island, it's relieving.

Another question I have is the fact that they've known each other for YEARS now? I'm just, sure 200 chapters later and a few islands and all, but considering how it shouldn't take that long for them to be going island to island and such, I'm just heavily shocked that years had passed by and Olivia left them despite years of getting to know each other. Just uh- wow? Maybe I'm not reading things right, so correct me on this if I am indeed wrong.

I also just realized that The Pasa Pasa fruit is an actual fruit gained non-canonically. Though it was only from the video game, it is pretty cool.

The fact that it's implying that James is dying is quite concerning, though knowing he's the main character, I'm sure he wouldn't die, I'm just starting to miss him from the fic, though I don't hate Kelda or anything. Really it's fun to see her in the position of first mate, since I do vaguely remember you stating in the author's note long ago that you were planning on killing her since she served her purpose of opening the box, it's nice to see where she is now.

This review is getting long and I have a few more questions, but I'm sure those questions can be answered through the other chapters you post. I can't wait to see how things unfold and I hope there'd be less death soon, it's starting to get kinda sad. Thanks for all the work you put into these chapters! I excitedly wait for the next ones.

I always wondered why nobody used weapons infused with dials hehehe
Have why I submitted a character for the very fic with dial infused weapons.
Didn't expect James to go that route

Ohooo
New weapon!

so because this application is stupid my previous review did not send. I said a lot in my first attempt to review but I'll try to see if I can try to rewrite it? well first I pointed out how the chapter name and the page name are slightly different. I haven't reviewed in a while but I am very nervous for James and the crew and Marco is not helping in this regard. The way he treats marines is horrible and I am very concerned over it. I understand he went through a lot. He lost his captain and his friends. But the mind set of Marines being the same as animals is absolutely horrible. Some marines truly believes they are doing the right thing. They are human beings that has friends, wives, mothers, fathers, siblings and maybe even children. Killing them in the name of sick and twisted revenge is horrible keeping such mindsets does not make him any bette than the marines themselves. I was hoping he would be better than that. I was hoping Olivia would be better than that (despite seeing and knowing what she went through). I know this fic is highly more realistic than One Piece. People die and the consiquences James leaves behind doesn't do anything good unlike what Luffy has done. There is a very dark contrast between them that James has a tunnel like vision for what he aims for and goes for it. Luffy also aims for something but he lives for the moment. James will cut off anyone who may be useless to the goal he barely decided on a whim. Luffy will stay loyal to what he has decided what he believes. Perhaps it's just me who thinks this way. Perhaps I'm not reading into the chapters the right way and I had the wrong expectations. But I feel like we were promised adventure, aiming for dreams and finding friends and epic battles. We still get epic battles. But I feel like the adventure and the dream aiming is gone. It feels as if the end goal is simply find one piece and destroy the marines. It feels as if it's revenge and coup centric now. I don't even remember what everyone's dreams are. I'm not trying to critisize. This is your fic. You have full control. It's probably just me and by the end of the day and this review. I still love reading this fic and you chapters makes makes my day. I just hope we get some more adventure and dream chasing rather than "Let's fuck with the marines"

hm...the chapter says The Problems with Children and but the page says The Problems with Marines... been a while since I acually reviewed, but everything is such a mess and each chapter just makes me so nervous. The way this is heading makes me so nervous and Marco is not helping. I know he's grieving and all but "They're marines, they're practically animals" mindset is horrible and I hate him even more now even though I had been so excited to see him again. They're still humans Marco. I know marines are jerks but they're humans. Some of them believes they are really doing the right thing. Some of them have family and children who are waiting for them to come home. I know it's inevitable but it's still horrible to see someone with such mind set. I never expected this fic to be all nice and happy. Reading through it proves this story is darker and more realistic than One Piece itself (considering people actually rarely die in One Piece believe it or not, Luffy has never killed anyone he's fought) but I am very much shook by Marco (and Mildly by Olivia despite having seen what she has gone through) all in all I feel as though it has become a revenge fic rather than an adventure fic. They're more focused on destroying the system rather than finding One Piece and searching to accomplish their dreams. At this point we don't even know what each person's dream is anymore. I'm not trying to critisize, this is your fic you can allow it to run as much as you want. But I feel as if we were promised adventure centric and end up having more of a revenge centric. but maybe that's just me. I still love the story and I'll still keep reading so please keep up the wonderful chapters

thanks

Weyland sure has a massive arsenal.
And ohhh heat and cold huh..
Interesting

The big guys dish it out now..!
I forgot who Ethan is :P

Goooo Kelda!

Ohooo
The crew is in time!

Wait what just happened at the end!

Nice chapter!
Loving Kian!