| Reviews for For Nina |
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   inactiveaccount85 chapter 9 . 9/19/2019 Oh...Alphonse. Al. I just LOVE these moments when Al's point of view is presented. And again, another great chapter! |
| inactiveaccount85 chapter 8 . 9/19/2019 This one is SO ominous! I LOVE that you don't know what the end result is. I HATE that you're left not knowing what has happened! And all of Edwards names. I really enjoyed that, for some reason! Thank you for this, my friend, and on to the next one! |
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 9 . 9/18/2019 Yikes, tension is nuts. Wonder if Truth saw Tucker as worse and actually frowned for Nina and wanted Ed to get that right? |
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 8 . 9/18/2019 She’s turning more into the ones with Greed, but I’m hoping her human half stays more dominant...honestly for long term sanity. |
| inactiveaccount85 chapter 7 . 8/26/2019 Oh my gosh... The chimera has self awareness...? That... That is awful. I can't even imagine the horror of that. For some reason, that thought just makes me want to cry. |
| inactiveaccount85 chapter 6 . 8/26/2019 Two things. Firstly, I am SO glad that I am the first to review this new chapter. Secondly, I love that you returned to Alphonse's point of view. It adds a completely new layer of pain. Not only his own. But the pain of him watching his brother's pain as well, helpless to do anything. And that inability to ease his tension and frustration because of his armored body. That it wouldn't actually help him 'feel' better. Just... I had never really given that aspect of his condition. The emotional pain with no way out. In closing, another incredible chapter. Thank you! And on to the next! |
| inactiveaccount85 chapter 5 . 8/18/2019 This is getting SOOOOOO interesting. And I love how this is linear and follows a plot, even though each chapter is written in drabble form. I also love the tension that has been introduced in this latest chapter! Please, update soon! |
| inactiveaccount85 chapter 4 . 8/18/2019 The way you described Basque Grande as so cold and calloused. Incredible. And every single time he referred to Nina and Alexander as 'the specimen' I FELT it. GAH! It was very interesting to get this from Mustang's point of view. I liked that. Especially in regards to Ishbal extermination. How they were both involved, but that Mustang has NO idea how it affected Grande. Very powerful. |
| inactiveaccount85 chapter 3 . 8/18/2019 Oh wow. Alphonse. I feel like he's always presented with such optimism. Rarely to we get to see this side of him. And I quite like it! I liked all of the details that he noticed. His view of things really brings the reader into this segment. I also like how Hawkeye reminds him of Pinako. Never thought of that... But... I like it! |
| inactiveaccount85 chapter 2 . 8/18/2019 I have to admit that this is pretty incredible. And..I think that the shorter drabble chapters make it that much more emotionally potent. Well done! LOVE this! |
| inactiveaccount85 chapter 1 . 8/18/2019 Oh wow... How have I not see this one yet?! |
| Sentinel07 chapter 4 . 2/24/2014 I like this. Please continue. |
| Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 4 . 2/2/2014 Aw! :D LOVE this! Poor Mustang and Ed, but this is GREAT! *U* *U* Rock on! |
| author12306 chapter 4 . 2/1/2014 Ooh, I liked this chapter. So mysterious. |
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 4 . 1/31/2014 Oh dear, how is Ed? |
