Hi, nice story.
Please continue

I’m very in LOVE with this story,and I’d really appreciate it if you continue with it,plus I don’t really have negative comments towards this fic, I’m just addicted as hell!But I’m also just a random fan, but even so please acknowledge my request.(Sorry my review is so long,but I just wanted you to know how I feel!Good Luck!)

Finish this please. Why do you leave me with cliff hangers. This is a really good one so please I beg u post another chapter

I really am enjoying this story. I hope you do continue it. I'm looking forward to seeing Kai and Tyson interact with each other again.

I just started reading yesturday and I've just flown through these chapters that's how much I'm enoying it. I can't wait for the next chapter! Just a few medical critics though. If kai had a fractured tibia and fibula. He would have a whole leg cast. And definitly a crutch. I can see him being stuborn and walk on a broken leg with no cast. But in the correct cast the one leg would be bent(so shorter then the other when walking) or he would have surgery on it and have a whole cast anyways.

And on that note I so hope I get to read something about kai being crazy and carring tyson(whose ankel is sprained) despiet him having a broken leg. It's so kai I love it and can't help but laugh at the possible expressions he my get for it.

Well don't stop nao!

This story has a nice flow. Keep up the good work :)

It's been a long time since I read such a fic like this, I really loved it.
Please update soon.

AHHHH this is so so GOOD! This is one of my favourite fanfic tropes and you have handled it with Tyson and Kai so wonderfully. THEY ARE SO IN CHARACTER! I need the next chapter, please please continue soon!

This is an awesome chapter (with the nicely written, not-so-awesome Voltaire - he's mean D': )! It's really sad that Kai had to go through that abuse again.. That Voltaire has no heart! Kai is still basically recovering and he gets a kick like that? Ugh! I so hate that guy.. But hey, great job on writing him out as the evil villain. You did it so well :') It's also cute and dramatic at the same time when you made Tyson hurt and confused as to why he hurts "that way." Based from experience, I was also that confused when I fell in love for the very first time.. also with the same gender... and my best friend.. *sniff* I can totally relate, like really, really relate TwT You wrote it out so well, I AM SO PROUD OF YOU! *hug*

You did a great job! Do keep it up! TwT

AW yay, it was so great! I was excited when I started reading, then I got sad when Voltaire bullied Kai. That scene evoked sorrowful feelings in me.
But when Tyson drove them all to Kai's mansion - now that was hilarious, hahahaha! God, I loved that one! Poor Rei! :D
Oi-oi, and now, finally, they meet again. God, I can't wait to get know what will be Kai's reaction, or Tyson's. Will they talk, or some of them run away because of his feelings? It would be good if they talked at least, instead of hiding from the other one. It's not something they can avoid for eternity.

I will wait eagerly for the next one! *shows thumb up*

Ah, such things are definitely complicated. Glad to see another chapter so soon! Looking forward to more. Kind of wondering when (or if) they will actually just talk to each other and realize the problem...

Great chapter!

It was a cool chapter! I can't wait to read the next one. :)
Hm, yeah. I figure that Kai has already regretted coming back to his grandfather. I instantly knew that he didn't choose that way because he neglects Tyson and his friends but because he thought he should give for his grandfather a second chance, just like Tyson did for him. However, not everyone appraise that second chance, especially not Voiltare. OH dear, I already fear what is he planning again.
In Tyson's place, I would march straight to that castle and talk to Kai... But knowing Tyson, I figure he will do something like that. And as I see, emotions starts to emerge in both of them. ;P

I'll be waiting for the next one. :)

Nice, I guess there will be a sequel regarding Voltaire's secret plans for the gang. I said sequel since the summary said "Tyson and Kai hiking in the woods, got stuck in a snowstorm...". So I thought, Voltaire's revenge might be another story.

I understand what you mean

1. Kai plays the role of the Jerk with a heart of gold, but sometimes on occasions, just a plain jerk (to Tyson).

2. You got a point there. In the Manga this was sort of the reason they punch each other and Tyson wants to knock some senses into him.

Hope this helps!