Reviews for Metus
AmaraRae chapter 1 . 7/3/2018
wait a minute? do this fic starts off with Dick and Jay already back? there's no come back scene?
apWing chapter 10 . 6/4/2016
I wanted to be honest. I liked it but there were so many loose ends left...the whole story for 9 chapters you built this angst/drama between BG and RG and instead of delivering it was just she saw his blue eyes...that was dissappointing. The artemis/Hood was intriguing and very fun, a nice twist. I just wish what you two had been building towards for the first 9 chapters could finally find fruition before it was all over, there is absolutely no closure to this...I read this after reading your other story that was a precurser to this but they do not go hand in hand. The build up of confrontations was there but no confrontations ever occured...

Im sorry I don't mean to berate your work in any way, I enjoyed the read but wanted to share what I honestly felt after reading it.
Dratias chapter 10 . 5/29/2016
Can I just say this was totally awesome? I really enjoyed reading this. Really wish we could have seen what happened during those three years Dick was gone though.. Can't even imagine what happened when he first found Jason. Great ending there as well. Can't wait for the sequel. So happy Wally's still alive. Love that speedster.. Anyhow, thanks for writing this. I loved seeing the whole Batfamily together.

- Dratias
TV Manic 2 chapter 10 . 4/6/2016
Wow. Just wanted to tell you that this was absolutely amazing. I have just lost four hours reading this rollercoaster, and it was four hours well spent. The characterizations were spot on, and the inclusion of Steph and Cass when most authors seem to think there are only batboys was most welcome. I loved the angst, the hurt/comfort... pretty much everything to be honest. Looking forward to more in this universe, (i need to know what happens to wally!) and I now have to go check your profile for more!
Guest chapter 10 . 3/25/2015
I really liked the development in Artemis and Jason's relationship; they're both very similar people and it totally makes sense. It'll be fun seeing what happens with that when they get Wally back. Hope the sequel comes out sooner than later!
The Shadow Keeper chapter 10 . 2/10/2015
I have fallen in love with this story! I can't wait for more!
jdcocoagirl chapter 10 . 2/9/2015
wow alot of unexpected turns of event. i like that babs did not give up. jayson and artemis night in together and seemingly painful to revisit wally's disappearance. i can'twait for all the intangle ent to be untied.
Goingdownwithmyshipz chapter 10 . 2/8/2015
Oh my god oh my god oh my god so fantastic and amazing and I love it and this may possibly be the best ending to a story in the history of stories! I loved this story it was absolutely amazing!
2702509 chapter 9 . 2/5/2015
Ö Waaa, can't believe it! Update (: I'm so happy right now. I was hoping to read more from you, because I really like the story and how you write... I'll wait for the nest chapter :D Please update soon
jdcocoagirl chapter 9 . 1/26/2015
like how this is done it seems that babs became more of a pillar and a mother to the rest of the batclan. bruce, diana and clark seems to have more knowledge of what happen than the all let on. more soon.
Fox in the Rough chapter 9 . 1/25/2015
Awww poor Dickie! Love the new chapter can't wait for the next one :)
Goingdownwithmyshipz chapter 9 . 1/25/2015
Oh my god this was fantastic I've waited so long for a new chapter and this one was definitely worth the wait o absolutely loved it. So many emotions aND the anguish and everything I loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter, fantastic job!
BatShitCrazy21 chapter 8 . 10/16/2014
This has to be the BEST story I have read so far! The story and characters were so well looked after and writing was 10/10 in my books! It has the right amount of action, drama, romance and humor! Please update asap! I can't wait to know what happens! It is currently 4:08 am in the morning for me, I literally stayed up reading this and now stuffed for uni tomorrow! BUT IT WAS WORTH IT! There is not enough words how much I love this. I just want more! I love seeing them as a team and all the character development! Although rough at the end where James tells him to stay away! :( I just have to know what happens!
Guest chapter 2 . 9/25/2014
Barbra is being a bit of a bitch. I get that Dick messed up, but being all passive-aggressive on him sure as hell isn't helping. She really needs to cut him a break.
Guest chapter 8 . 8/7/2014
I like how this is going, but please don't kill Dick, or make him leave again, (while I could understand if he decided to commit suicide I doubt the rest of the Bat family would let him. )
Could you make a scene where Commissioner Gordon realizes, (possibly by talking to Bruce.) that Dick was there and he told Dick, not Bruce.
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